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The Black Box

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Summary

The City has black walls. And eyes everywhere. When seventeen-year-old Rose and her friends break the night curfew, they think they'll get away with it. They're wrong. The system doesn't forgive. And the deeper they dig for the truth, the clearer it becomes: nothing—neither inside nor outside the walls—is what it seems.

Genre
Scifi
Author
Arden_Seed
Status
Ongoing
Chapters
5
Rating
5.0 1 review
Age Rating
16+

Night Curfew (Part 1)

Eyes open. Darkness swallowed the room. A quick click of the flashlight brought the watch face into focus. 11:40. Already dressed beneath the sheets, ready for the night’s excursion. She sat up, back pressing against the headboard.

Tonight, just two days before school reopened, her crew would break the night curfew. A tradition they’d kept for years.

She swung her legs off the bed, adrenaline sharpening her senses. Pushed off the swivel chair. Sneakers on. She grabbed the black cap from the drawer. Flipped it backward. A quiet glide toward the door. Fingers pressed the knob, testing the resistance.

Across the hall, her mother’s bedroom door stood ajar, the faint rhythm of snoring slipping through. Tiptoes down the corridor. Top of the spiral wooden stairs. She descended step by step, skipping the penultimate one—the squeaky trap. Through the living room, navigating furniture by memory, until her fingers met the cold aluminum of the front door. A swift turn of the lock. A quiet click. Out into the yard.

Despite the summer’s lingering heat, a cool night breeze cut through the heavy air. The sign by the iron gate read: N24.3. House number three, Block twenty-four, Northern Sector.

She moved low, hugging the fences, darting between pools of streetlight. Her heart hammered against her ribs, loud enough to wake the entire City, she swore. Any second now, the Guards would turn the corner.

They’d slipped past before. Eric made it possible. The Governor’s son. He’d been feeding them the patrol schedules for years. Rose trusted he’d never rat them out. None of them doubted it.

At the next intersection, four shadows huddled against the hedge. A broken streetlamp above left them in perfect cover. An ideal meeting point, close to the City’s northern edge.

“Finally! Honestly, I didn’t think you’d show. Figured you’d chicken out.”

“Shut it, Eric.” Rose made sure to cut him off early.

“You good?” Lara asked. Despite her reservations, she never missed their reckless runs.

“All good.” A quick nod to ease her friend.

“Big deal. With the patrol routes mapped out, a six-year-old could do this.”

Four pairs of eyes locked onto Eric.

Eric’s eyes flicked to Rose. The words were for the group. The weight was for her.

Her jaw tightened. She didn’t need to look at him to feel the smirk.

“Enough with the crap. If we’re gonna sit here all night, let’s just do it. Or should we invite the Guards to join us? They love a good party.” Tom’s patience had a hard limit. He cut through the noise and pointed forward. “Move.”

Past the sector boundary, they slipped out of the City. Flashlight beams carved narrow paths through the northern outskirts. Pavement gave way to dirt, then to low scrub.

The climb began at the mountain’s base. The higher they went, the thicker the trees grew, closing in until they formed a tight, ring-like thicket.

A moment of inattention sent Chase face-first into a thick trunk. Luckily, both he and his wire-frame glasses survived without a scratch.

No more mishaps. They reached the summit. And instantly, the air was sharp, charged with the kind of freedom only breaking curfew could bring.

Below them sprawled the dark mass of the City. Streetlights spilled over the rooftops, and with a little imagination, they looked like a floating sheet of white light. Beyond the urban grid, absolute darkness swallowed the outskirts and their landscape. And past that, rising like a verdict, stood the edge of their world: the towering black walls, stretching straight into the sky.

Scattered rock formations broke the hill’s surface. They headed for the largest one, near the center. Natural hollows in the stone made for decent seats. They settled in, angling their flashlights downward until a bright circle pooled at their feet.

Eric dropped his shoulder bag, unzipped it, and pulled out five beers. Lifted from the Governor’s estate. He just hoped his stepmother, Claudette, hadn’t noticed. She only paid attention to him when his behavior threatened the family’s image. He tossed a bottle to each of them. The opener passed hand to hand. Cold beer hit their tongues, and the conversation started.

“Fuck. School starts again day after tomorrow,” Tom muttered.

The mood dropped. Silence settled over them.

One year left. Then the scatter. Medical tracks for the girls. Three mandatory years in the Guards for Tom and Chase. Eric already had his father’s shadow carved into his path. Marriage. One child. The law didn’t bend for dreams.

Tom cracked his knuckles. Chase adjusted his glasses, staring at his shoes. Even Eric’s smirk didn’t reach his eyes.

“Snap out of it.” Eric tried to cut through the gloom. “Let’s enjoy tonight. We’re all here. Together.”

Shoulders dropped. The tension bled out into the night air.

“The girls are gonna crush it,” Tom said, pride in his voice.

“Yep. One doctor, one nurse,” Chase added, puffing his chest.

“And they’ll work at the same medical center,” Eric chimed in, playing along. “If you land a civil service post at the Governor’s office, Tom, we’ll all keep crossing paths.” He stood up, shifting into his serious act. “Fear not, my citizens. I’ll be the Governor you actually deserve. This City will enter a new era. I’ll scrap these rotten laws.” He paused, then dropped the act. “Plus, you’ll finally have some real pull.”

“Bullshit,” Tom shot back, grinning. “Nice help you’ll be when the walls collapse on our heads.”

“What about you?” Lara asked, locking eyes with Chase.

“Dunno. Maybe I’ll actually pull my grades up this year...” His voice trailed off, uncertain.

“What does our future doctor have to say about all this? How’s she picturing her bright future?” Eric never left Rose out of the spotlight.

Silence. Just a distant stare into the dark.

“Where’d you go?” He stood up and nudged her shoulder, a little too hard.

She flinched, snapping her gaze up to glare at him.

“Let’s talk about something else,” Lara tried, stepping in before things blew up.

Through all their years of friendship, Rose had always been the one to spark the real conversations. This time, she did it with a single question.

“What do you think is out there? Beyond the walls?”

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woah loved it👏🏻

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