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Christian | Poet | Artist | Novelist

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Par excellence

I only switch to French when I am deeply moved by something, and that's what your poetry did to me. It was wonderful, c'est incroyable. You wrote that had me connecting with myself in ways that nobody ever has. Your poetry is amazing, tu est une bonne poète. You impressed me beyond words. I'm just speechless.

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Good work!

I don't much see the appeal of books about horses but the cover of yours intrigued me which is why I gave the story a chance. I ended up actually liking the story. The description was powerful and on point. It's a great story! Keep up the good work!

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The Unnamed

I usually struggle to understand stories like this but in your case, the delivery was so seamless which made it amazing. Could use a little more dialogue on my opinion.

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Good

This type of poetry is not my usual cup of tea, but I liked the way you took the idea and didn't just develop it but actually transformed it into something beautiful. You made beautiful poetry. I respect that.

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Exquisite

I don't have much experience with psychological pain and trauma but the way your wrote your poems got me to feel that. The emotions in your work are so raw and powerful. Its glorious! Magnificent actually. I loved every single bit of it.

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Excellent

I like this. It feels like something written by an experience professional. Clearly, a lot of research went into the making of this novel and you have my deepest respect. I'll keep my eye out for more from you.

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Interesting...

As someone who studied the art of writing poetry for several years before indulging in the actual making of poetry, I have the experience and expertise to distinguish a good collection of poems from a bad one. This is one of the few good poem books out there. The number one thing that stood out to me was not the personal connection of the poet to their words but rather how it was conveyed. You did not abandon the literary devices sprinkling your poem with similes, metaphors and hyperboles. Most poets these days disregard the literary devices, letting their emotions solely guide them. Emotions are essential to the artistry of poetry, but the use of figures of speech is too. While your grammar could use a little work (just one or two errors I found), I must admit this is an impressive anthology you have here. I went beyond my usual, first five poems to read the first ten because I was piqued by your unique writing style. The three words I will use to describe this are relatable, distinctive and exquisite.

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Amazing

Even though I deeply enjoy writing poetry, I consider reading it such a pain. That is why I was surprised when I read the first poem in your book and found myself wanting more. I hardly ever read someone else's poetry, but yours was so good I just HAD TO. I can only describe it with the word Amazing. It truly was some of the best poetry I ever read. Looking forward to more from you!

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Eh

I never imagined I'd spend three hours straight just so I could finish an undercover spy romance book. It's a hackneyed plot but for some reason, this story was more captivating than the others. The idea of them falling in love happened all too quickly, and even though I loved Lexi's character, I honestly can't understand why Max fell in love with her so esily. And that ending bit seemed like something in a fairy tale. I'd say this is a soft seven out of ten.

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