Okay so I adore this story. I only knocked one star off plot for historical inaccuracies because I'm a bit of a stickler for that. The ending broke my heart though, considering you already changed history couldn't you (SPOILER) change it a bit more and have them together!!!! I want an alternative ending :D But I really love it, the chemistry between the two characters is amazing, I was riveted the whole time. I was actually sad when I finished it. And was devastated about how it ended :'( I voted for you for the FanFic 2 competition - hope you win or at least come in the top 3!!! And if you ever have spare time change the ending for me!!! ;)Read the story now
I agree with other reviewers that there were some elements that need polishing, and there was the odd grammatical mistake. But I liked the characterisation of the characters and the plot was compelling. I think with another revision this could be an excellent story, and I hope you stick with it. Thank you for sharing :)Read the story now
The Ending I Wanted!
I was heartbroken by the end of Chuck, I know the beach scene was meant to give hope but this, THIS, was the ending that I wanted. It was beautifully written, captures the original characters wonderfully, and I was completely hooked while reading it. Thank you so much for sharing!Read the story now
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