Abbey Holder

Brooklyn

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Inconsistent

I am unsure as to their relationship. This book is mostly smut and erotica with no depth. I thought it was going to have the smut with characters that actually changed over time or had some type of human interaction outside of sex and the barely going to work. She doesn’t even question the fact that Micheal showed up at her house, but instead sleeps with him. I’m at a lost however I am just waiting for her reaction to Micheal’s secret.

Edit: After 13 chapters she realizes she knows this guy. How could she not? She’s been sleeping with this guy everyday looking in his eyes and now she remembers lmao. She reminds me of someone Ik.

Anyway nice read.

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