Abygail B. Jennings

Very Creative

This is a very creative and descriptive story that any Sci_Fi or Fantasy lover will become addicted to.
The description is very well detailed and it gives the author a vivid mental picture.
I love how the story went from the city of Atlantis to a castle with dragons.
I recommend this to all Sci_Fi and Fantasy lovers.

Very Entertaining

The author did very well at building the world that these characters live in.
Each character had their own personality and that can be something that can be very hard to accomplish. There were some spelling errors that needed fixing but other than that, this is a pretty good read.

Very Addictive

The story is brought together really well.
The main character's personality is very different from the other characters. The author did very well at giving each character their own personality.
There were the occasional grammar slips but other than that, this is a great read and I recommend it to any fantasy lover.

So much better than I expected

Living with the Avengers is an amazing story and will pull you in right from the start. I only counted two or three spelling errors throughout the entire thing. The reader gets to be pulled in to moments that will make you laugh, cry, punch a wall, and scream in your pillow. So what if it is a fan fiction? A good story is a good story.

Ps. The best characters were Thor and Hawkeye.

Dark

The story was very well thought out. The author definitely put a lot of work into this book. I would work on fixing the grammatical errors but this is a good book overall.

Enjoyable Sci-Fi

I really enjoyed reading this. I love the genre of Sci-Fi more than anything else. Though the book takes place in the same world as a video game, the author made sure that the story was understood by everyone, including those who had never played the game. I recommend this story to any Sci-Fi fan.

'Truths'

The book is a very creative idea. The author does have scenes where the grammar is poor but everyone has their ups and downs. I hope that the author continues to take the advice given to her by all of her readers. I hope that she continues to grow her knowledge of writing in order to make her works better.

Different

This story is different than most of the stories on Inkitt. I did feel that the story was going by a little fast and the author kept giving the reader questions but not answering them. I would suggest having someone proofread the story before sending it out. I did like the story overall but there is always something that can be changed for the better.

Great Book

The story seemed to be moving too fast at first, but as the chapters moved on, the writing improved. This is a good read for any fantasy lover. Keep writing. 😃

Could Use Editing

The story is good but the author doesn't know when to use commas, colons, semicolons, ect.

When someone is speaking, the correct way to write it would be
"What are you doing?" The girl asked.

The author wrote,
What are you doing the girl asked.

Other than the poor grammar, this could be a great story.

Not what I expected

When reading what this story was about, I was expecting it to be a story of someone trying to survive the Zombie Apocalypse. This was so much more than that. The author put in news articles that talked about a 'disease.' He also added government meetings and law changes along with journals kept by scientists .and average civilians.
The only grammatical error that I noticed was in a chapter where the nations leaders had a meeting. The author missed some words. Other than that, this is a great story and I am intrigued by it.
Keep writing.

Interesting start

The author had a good start to her story but there were some elements that could have been fixed. She used the word 'said' multiple times an example would be:

What the author put: "Thank you." She said

Instead of: 'Thank you!' She exclaimed happily.

This is something that can be easily fixed with some editing.

Another thing that I would like to cover is how she divided her paragraphs. Sometimes readers understand things easier when the paragraphs are spread apart. I would suggest asking someone to proofread your story before posting it out.

Very Creative

The authors writing style is very unique. She writes it in such a way that the reader is also a character in the story. I found it very interesting when the main character would try to communicate with the reader (Myself) and would ask for an opinion.
There were a few errors such as missing words and misused words. Other than that, this was a very interesting story.
The last thing that I want to be sure to mention is how eight chapters of the book all took place in one room and the author still kept me engaged. I can see how that would be difficult to do and I admire the author for it. I suggest this story to anyone who enjoys Sci-Fi.

Gripping

This book was very well written and the author was very good at giving his readers a clear mental picture. Some paragraphs seemed to be in strange places but other than that, the grammar was on point. Overall, this is a great read.

Not what I expected

When I read the summary I just expected the average love story. This was not your average love story. There seemed to be hints of fantasy and Sci-Fi in the book. It seemed to take place in an end of the world setting. I did think that it was strange how one moment Jo was running out of his apartment and the next minute, he was with a group of looters and the end of the world all happened in two minutes. I think that if the author went into more detail about why they were looting stores and why there were children crying on the street that this could be a good book. I also noticed strange grammatical errors and I am suspecting that English is not the authors first language.

Interesting but different

This seems to be a story written in the bad guys point of view. Right from the start the main character was just always angry. Then when her anger exploded, she took it out on people who cared about her and, as the book said, she had no remorse. It is a story that I can see griping the readers attention but did have minor spelling errors such as missing spaces and some of the paragraphs were placed in a strange way.

Interesting

This book seems like it has real potential. I did find it confusing how the author jumped from person to person and switched the point of view from first to third person. I would suggest adding a heading with the name of which character the point of view is told in. It does seem like an interesting novel that will attract more readers.

Awesome

Daryl and Carol are an awesome walking dead duo. This book was great at capturing Carol’s emotion. Thank you for writing this.

Awesome

This novel is nothing like anything that I have read before. It is amazing. I hope the author is working on the sequel. I can’t wait.

Depressing but good

I love to see a type of future for Katniss and Gale, but it is sad to know that Gale lived his whole life in regret for something that he was forgiven for. This is a touching story and I thank the creator for making it.

Good but not great.

This was a good book but the spelling errors where everywhere. This was a good book with a good ending. Something to change would be the age group this book is for. I personally would let a thirteen year old read this.