Alaric Winters

England

I am a British writer writing a series of books about shape shifters and myths! Check out Alpha of Glass and Throne of Embers and keep an eye out for the rest of the Shattered Illusions series soon!

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Good, but too many emoji's

I think that without the overuse of Emoji's the book could be good. Remove the capital letters and space out the book, add some filler and some more information about the characters that relates to the plot. Think of it as a fully published book - books don't usually have emojis. I know it's probably a little bit of a stretch for me to say that is what ruined it, but a lot of people on this website probably wouldn't read on because of the amount of Emjoi's included.

Overall, a good book, just need to edit it and work on the outline. All constructive criticism. Hope this helps.

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So far so good

I am already interested in this story. I think the theme of gods is really powerful and whilst it has been done a lot, this has a new spin on things.

Just small issues with telling instead of showing - things like 'the throne of the dead' being made out of the bones of the deceased. Maybe something falls off the throne to show us this instead of telling us. I'm not sure.

Overall, I really like this idea. Keep up with it, I can't wait to read on!

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So far so good

So far, so good, I will definitely be keeping up to this book - it is usually not a genre I would read. But Calypso seems... different than other protagonists, she understands that there is something wrong with the world around her, and in herself as well.

The bio seems intriguing, the preface seemed gripping, I have yet to find a fault so far and I will definitely be updating my review within time, but I just thought I would write a quick one here for reference!

Great work so far! Cannot wait to read more!

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Great start

I have not read much yet, but I am surprised at the way this story is already unfolding. Savannah is a great protagonist and the villain of the story had an interesting start as well - I love the nickname that he has, it makes me wonder who gave it to him and how he got it. What was the reason behind the two characters history dissolving and is Savannah going to choose to be on the side of her superiors or not?

I'm sure all these questions will be answered throughout the book, but I really want to know now. So I guess, I will just have to read on! Great start!

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Wow

This is so beautifully written for something so harrowing and hard to go through. I am so happy that you are getting your life back on track, it will take time but you will sort something out, I am sure. I am sorry that you had to go through that at such a young age and make so many hard choices you should never have had to. I hope you get to see your sister again eventually, and that your life is happy once again - and good luck with your degree!

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Interesting idea!

Love the idea of this! Can't wait to keep reading

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