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Aloha Derek, I'm Melody's Friend from Y0utube.
She recommended me this story and it turned out very interesting.
The story overall is very well written, that's a good thing as I seen some stories so poorly written that they made no sense at all.
Hope you will write a part 2 soon.

Cheers, Haukea

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