Absolutely Loved This
I just, seriously can't believe how great this is! You conveyed so much emotion into each and every character really well and it added so much to my personal enjoyment of this story. You didn't explicitly tell the audience what was going on and kept me guessing, but you didn't leave anything too ambiguous that I was left confused. Through many different scenes (especially the Plain of Sighs one) I was left in tears and I'm not a crier. All the characters were kept in character but I really enjoyed this different side of River that we didn't really see of her in the show (except for the Name of the Doctor), it added a lot to her character.
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Seriously, this fic was just brilliant!!!