P. Ambrose Frontain

An old soul with older soles

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Crazy Good Horror!

This is a good beginning and I look forward to you reading where this story goes. I am terrified of the creatures you developed!
Update - I LOVE that latest chapter, and the personality of your main character. She is a bad-ass who I'm counting on to save her friend and the world. I hope you keep writing because I think every chapter is better than the last!

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A Wild Ride!

I absolutely love the beginning, it is funny but realistic. The two main characters are definitely crazy and I can't wait to see what trouble they will get into.

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The Danger of Space

It is a gripping start. The first two chapters really get across the feeling of doom and you want to know how things got to this place. The two main characters are described well and Tetch is a great archetypal leader. The third chapter really grabs you the most and keeps your attention. This is a good short story on its own and I love the ending. It would also be good as the start of a series.

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I'm Hooked...

Really fun storytelling! I liked the main character right away, and I like the quick pace - the writing moves along smoothly. There are good points/details about the characters and the world to give you a clear impression but I like that this is seamless and doesn't slow you down.
There are a very few items to edit - like a comma here and there - nothing that detracts from the read.
Also - I enjoyed the cursing. Sometimes cursing seems forced, but it was funny and spot-on in this story.
I would read more if this were to become a longer story.

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Sci-fi at its best

Sci-Fi at its best with colorful characters you will love. This is beautifully written and also funny. I personally love the science parts, but it is the interaction with the characters (there is some serious chemistry there) that keeps me reading.

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Stunning

This is a very beautifully written short story that captures your imagination. I highly recommend it.

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Darkly Magical Fantasy

This is a Fantasy with rich, colorful and poetic writing. The characters are fresh and unique and I look forward to reading more. It can be dark with danger, and the good vs. evil idea. You will love finding yourself in this world!

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Great first chapter! Can't wait to read more

I think this is an excellent story so far. First, the dialog is well crafted. There are a few places that could be edited but overall it is smooth.
The main character is described as somewhat self centered and yet very sympathetic which makes me want to keep reading to find out how he grows.
Some of the paragraphs are just beautiful with subtle descriptions like when he covers the reflection in the paint of his motorcycle. It really shows you that there is more under the surface of this person.
There are very few places where I think a change is needed. Like when he says he lost his license but he got "it" back from the impound lot. I think it is supposed to say he got the bike back from the lot. But, this type of editing is minor and overall the quality is very high.
As someone who used to ride motorcycles, the description is so good it makes me want to ride again!
There are so many stories about people falling into other worlds but this idea is fresh and captivating like a brand new idea.
The only reason I didn't give 5 stars is that I have a lot of reading still. If I can I will update this when I'm done.

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