Andreas Hytoff

Ich lebe in meinem Kopf.

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Original and addictive

My rating is for the first 25 chapters of the story. My full review will be left on Amazon/Goodreads once I've completed it.
The reason for 4 stars on punctuation and grammar is due to some typos, but they weren't a big deal. Every writer makes them, and editors are expensive AF, so I'm not going to fault the author for that. I do the same.

OKAY! on to the review!

So, the story takes place in a different type of world, a dystopian two class system made up of the rich and thin and the poor and fat.
The only way to be thin is to pay into TITS, a transdimentional system where extra fat is stored. Much of the story surrounds TITS and its function, but it isn't all it appears to be.

The story is very cleverly executed, much different than anything I've read before. I found it difficult to stop reading once I started. The author is clearly very intelligent, as she seems to have a good working knowledge of how governments function and a good eye for propaganda and psychological programming. I was thoroughly impressed with how well everything was covered.
I loved the bits of humor scattered around the story. I laughed out loud several times, mostly at the word play around the tits abbreviation as well as Cindy associating vitamin C with orange soda.

The characters are engaging as well. I've come to find myself invested in Cindy, and enjoyed learning the truth right along with her.

Of course, the story ends here on Inkitt after chapter 25, so I grabbed it off Amazon for $3.99 which isn't bad at all for the quality and length of the story you get. I just think of it as buying a coffee. You really don't lose out, and you get to support a good author at the same time. Win/win.

I would recommend this story for anyone who likes absurd themes, sci-fi, dystopian, and humor.

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