Boo

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Good story

This story is good. I like the way the characters are presented, I like your way of telling and the way you use the conjugation tenses.

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Amazing story but...

I like your story, we understand it quickly and it takes place in an environment that we like. I think you should just review your time use and some more grammar rules.

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Good Summary

I like your summary, I find it intriguing and at the same time funny. There's a cool little thing in it, it reminds me of an anime.

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Thank you

Your story is heartwarming. This makes us think about situations we have already lived in or will live one day. Your writing style is very beautiful and inspires me.

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GOOOOOOOD

It's funny but your story scared me, I was intrigued too. And, I loooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooove horror stories, dramas, possessions stories. It's weird, it's not every day that a book makes me feel what I feel when watching a horror movie. Thhhhhannnnnk you.

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THANK YOU

First of all, I really liked your introduction. You present the story without saying too much, which leaves a bit of suspense and makes us want to read more. I liked it from the first word because the woman has a great role. When I read that she was supposed to be the one who was to succeed her father, I was really happy. Most of the time we talk a lot more about men in this register. Thank you.

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Really Good

Usually, the stories with so many dialogs are boring but you did a really good job.

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Amazing

the story is beautiful, there is a marriage between fantasy and love.

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Good

I like it a lot because it's out of the ordinary.

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