Boo

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Good story

This story is good. I like the way the characters are presented, I like your way of telling and the way you use the conjugation tenses.

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THANK YOU

First of all, I really liked your introduction. You present the story without saying too much, which leaves a bit of suspense and makes us want to read more. I liked it from the first word because the woman has a great role. When I read that she was supposed to be the one who was to succeed her father, I was really happy. Most of the time we talk a lot more about men in this register. Thank you.

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Really Good

Usually, the stories with so many dialogs are boring but you did a really good job.

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