Anna.licious_writes

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I'm 26, a christian, mom and proud Seychellois ๐Ÿ‡ธ๐Ÿ‡จ โ–ช๏ธŽFriendly โ–ช๏ธŽCaringโ–ช๏ธŽan Introvertโ–ช๏ธŽAdviserโ–ช๏ธŽWriterโ–ช๏ธŽBeta Reader โ–ช๏ธŽVirgo babes โ™ Hope you enjoy my stories & support me throughout this journey.

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Alpha Adrian

This was one of the first book I've read on wattpad in 2018 and I was addicted to it. The plot lines were perfecto ๐Ÿ’•

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Great novel

The characters were incredible. The humans and their wolves were relatable, hence making them perfect. The plotline was interesting from the beginning to the end. I had a good read and I'll recommend the book to anyone who's a fan of mythical creatures. It's a good one.

Author of Broken Souls, Linus Cage and two other books,

Anna

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The First Bite

It was simply Amazing!!

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Amazing!!!!

I admit, at first I was kinda LOST lol. Adventure, Action, Humour, New adults, and Romance all jumbled up together aren't the types of genres I would normally go for - I'm a fantasy lover, period!

But, you, my dear, has managed to make the impossible become possible. You have captured my attention from the beginning till the end. It was a lovely read.

The only thing that bothered me sometimes, was the change in dialogue. I've felt lost on more than one occasion whenever the change in who's speaking happens - at times it's crystal clear, but other...

I would recommend the story to all adventurers... it's a great story.

Xx

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CASSIUS AND ADAM ๐Ÿ˜Š

You have a solid plot and I appreciate the direction it's heading. The paragraphs were well-versed, and the way you describe their sentiments is truly amazing.

Grammar and spelling are a pain in the ***, but we do have to pay attention to them as it plays a significant role in a story. Some readers are put off by a lot of errors while others just doesn't bother with them. You can run your story by a grammarly app/website to review errors, or have someone proofread your chapters after writing them.

I, myself, have a hard time writing in english, but I do what I can. We are writers, and we want our readers to stick with us from the start until the end of a journey. So, by presenting a well-written story, we have the chance to keep them in the loop.

I will recommend the story to all LGBTQ/erotica fans.

A lil tip: You are the author of your story and if you feel like advertising your other stories at the end of each chapter, you do it. A writer don't always have to please a reader.

Stay safe xx
Author of Broken Souls/Amaltheia/and The Lost Daughter

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Hot hot hot!!

You have a great plotline, and I honestly loved every words per chapter. It's written beautifully, and the characters are relatable. I love Maya's friendship with Erica, and also the fact that Clark is overprotective over the both of them. It's sweet. Jennifer can kiss ass, and Jonathan can suck dicks! Saying you're sorry, but keep doing the same thing, and at the office where they all work at that.. tsk.. at this length, his words have lost value to me. He's a real jerk.. Deacon is bae โค

I would recommend this story to all Erotica, and insatiable lovers. Can't wait to read more ๐Ÿ˜‹

Anna,
Author of AMALTHEIA, BROKEN SOULS etc..

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Intriguing but could use some grammatical edits

I love the feisty heroine. She's got guts and she's not afraid to show it. The Male is too cocky for his own good and so full of himself *huff* His ego is the size of planet earth, maybe even bigger.. Makes me want to jump into this story and pound his face viciously, repeatedly ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

I understand that English is not your native language as am I, but maybe you can try using spelling and grammar errors to make your sentences more accurate and interesting.

Overall, it was a great read and I'm proud to say, I binge read the story. Keep on blooming fellow writer ๐ŸŒธ

Author of Broken Souls, Linus Cage, and two more novels,

Anna

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Love love love love it

I binge read your book for two days and I'm glad I did. It was very interesting and the characters were phenomenal.

Can't wait to read more of your work..

From a fellow writer,

Anna

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Lovely

I enjoyed the book even if the chapters was a bit short โค

Keep blooming young fellow writer

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Captivating

Very grasping start and I love that she's a strong character. Those grammatical and punctuation errors are an easy fix, if you ask me.

Overall, you have gain my attention and I plan on reading more of your work.

From a fellow writer,

Anna

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Quite interesting short story!!

I enjoyed the story and the way that you've described the characters, they're well developed.

One thing that bugged me the most was the used of UPPER CASE. I usually preferred Sentence Case. Another thing is that maybe you should try using separate lines when a different person is speaking just to not confused your audience. Lastly, those small grammar and punctuation errors, it's an easy fix; which will make the story even more intriguing.

Overall, it was really an interesting read. I wish you the best of luck for your future stories.

From a fellow author,

Anna

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A dream turned into a short story

This short story was inspired by a dream I had about a little girl and a magical lake. In the dream, I remember vaguely that the lake changed her entire being, transforming her into someone else but at the end, she returned to her normal self.

I took two days to construct the plotlines and another one day to write the story. Since this is my very first short story, I will gladly accept good/ bad criticism from readers.

Thanks,

Anna (The Author)

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My Very First Book (The Author)

This story relates to my life in some ways excluding the supernatural part. And no I don't self-harm but the rest, pretty much. I decided to turn some of the events that happened into my life into a story and as you can see, this book was the ending product.

I still have many ways to go and I hope that you guys continued on supporting me during my journey.

Thank you,

Anna (The Author)

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Intriguing

It is very grasping and the development between the main characters are interesting.

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Amaziiiiiinng

Got me hooked from the start till the end. I love it โคโคโคโคโค

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Refreshing!

You really got me there I must say. I wasn't expecting it to be her own father. Wow very grasping. Good job so far!!

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A Living Color

I'm loving it so far and can't wait for more!!

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The Myth of Despair

Awesome plot you have there. Loved it ๐Ÿ’˜

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