AnneShirleyFan

Majoring in English Linguistics/Art and Cultural Mediation. Loves reading (absolutely anything) and writing! An absolute Harry Potter Fan. Korean🐯🐅🇰🇷 ✨Slytherin for lifeee🐍✨

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Very Endearing


The story overall was very endearing. Although I didn't watch the show, it was easy to feel compassionate to the characters. The author's writting style is superb as the descriptions were on point, the lines of the characters well thought out.
It would have been great if there were more descriptions about the background knowledge of the show! For example, I didn't really get what Tikki was before I searched it, and the term akumatized kinda bamboozled me😂
It would have been awesome if the author had cut the story into chapters since it is a bit long, but it's a whole complete story so I understand that the author wanted to keep it in one chapter :D

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Okay

The story was sweet. There were a few dramatic cliff hangers, and the characters all had a charm that drew the readers in.
However, I wish the ending was more explanatory. With the most dramatic event happening in the last chaptor, the ending seems...eh.
I personally think it would have been better with showing how the MCs recovered from the incident, checking their love for eachother was stronger than ever, how Vanessa and Caylee got what they deserved before showing the epilogue. Again, just my personal opinion.

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