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New York

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Good story!

This story definitely had more texture to it, a very nicely structured plot, and some intriguing characters. I found myself enjoying the read as the authors detailed descriptions allowed me to sink into it.

I liked the way the vampires were introduced here, although it left me with some questions and the occasional eyebrow raise.

Overall, I enjoyed it! Only thing that did bother me a bit were the misspellings scattered here and there, and some grammatical errors. But, it was easy to overlook as the plot was good!

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Amazing!

I absolutely enjoyed diving into this read! I’m so happy I set time aside to sink into the novel, it was most definitely worth the wait!

I really enjoyed the plot pacing for the novel, it was comfortable enough to get a feel of all the characters being introduced along with a small glimpse into their back stories! We, the readers, got an understanding of who the main character is as an individual, a sense into her personality and thought process. Along with a back story to both the main character and those important to her in her life. It was very clear and easy to absorb.

When I tell you the transition into the magic within this world was unexpected and a true joy to witness, it’s because it was! I was taken aback for a moment when Kathryn released her ability in one of the first chapters, not telling you exactly what cause ~ well ~ spoilers! But the introduction to the magic and the set rules for said magic was absolutely perfect! We got another glimpse into the past, a perfect way to explain without it being information dumping! Excellent work in that respect.

Overall, I really enjoyed this read! It was such a joy to sink into. The characters we very real and believable, and the magical world was introduced wonderfully. The author has a distinct and beautiful writing style, very oriented around detail, thus bringing these characters to life with her attention to detail.

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I enjoyed it ☺️

The book was a decent read, I thought the characters were pretty funny and unique in their own ways.

Lucas, the main love interest in this story, has a really possessive and dominant persona to him, all the while having a humorist personality. Selena, the protagonist, went through a rough past with her father, who sold to a random man who turned out to be decent. Selena’s character was full of snarky remarks and a bit of sass. All this tied together really makes for a compelling romance between the two, which it was!! We learn some very...interesting things about the protagonist.

I must mention that I do find that the novel could use some improvements on formatting and grammar; all of which could be fixed with some deep editing and a few rounds of proofreading. The suggestions in the comments presented some valid points on the book and what could help improve the overall look of it. With all this in mind, the book definitely has potential to be great!

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Loved it!

Oh my goodness I must compliment you on how well built your story was! My god I really enjoyed reading your work! It truly reminded me of Harry Potter and books alike! Although your story of course has your own unique twist along with your language. The characters were great and realistic, the dialogue never laid flat and had a fluid like flow to it. The descriptions, oh my, they were perfect! Truly amazing work! Well done ☺️

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Enjoyed it!

This was most definitely an interesting read! The main character is one snarky and hilarious young man full of the funnies come back and thoughts. Sadly enough he has a rough home life because of both his parents. It saddened me to know he has a sibling that’s also going through the same, but was refreshing to see he has a strong relationship with them.

The love interest in this book definitely has some mystery behind them, his actions did raise an eyebrow and just left me confused at some points. But I’m sure down the line there’ll be an explanation on it.

I do have to admit the formatting for this novel was a bit strange, paragraphs along with dialogue really threw me off at times, but nevertheless I was still able to sink into the writing. I believe with a few rounds of proofreads and edits this draft could be polished to a decent read. Overall, I enjoyed the book! Great work!

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THIS IS ONE STEAMY WONDERFUL READ YOU MUST PICK UP

I’m currently speechless after finishing this short novel...holy sh!t.

The writing style present in this novel was a work of art. The imagery and the emotions, I just can’t. Sam, you did an amazing job at bringing these characters to life and holy shiiit I went through 3 glasses of water while reading.. Amazing, all I can say...

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Intriguing

Very interesting novel! I loved the genuine feel of the characters and their realism, the writing style really helped bring out their personalities. The only thing I’d suggest is to go back and fix some grammatical errors here and there, but it’s very easy to over look as you read along ☺️ Great work!

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Freaking AMAZING!!

First of all, Am I so happy I found the time to dive into this book or I really would have missed out on this hidden gem.

The writing style: Beautiful
The characters: Intriguing and passionate
The storyline: Freaking amazing and alluring

This book had me hooked from the start! It’s written beautifully, the descriptions and attention to detail really allowed me to sink into this mysterious and dark world. The characters are full of realism and passion, it’s absolutely wonderful to witness. The dark, mysterious, sexy, and most definitely full of secrets love interests are such a plus to the story as well. Amazing work with this novel!

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The potential is there!

I liked it! I had always been a fanatic of the Siren Mythology, so seeing another book filled with this theology was refreshing. The author added her unique twists to the common knowledge about the myths which was also a pleasure to read!

One thing I do suggest for the author to improve her work and polish it is using this incredible page called, Grammarly. The software will definitely help polish up the writing along will the punctuation mistakes and all that good stuff!

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Lovely!

I enjoyed reading this authors work! Her story is unique in the sense of plot and writing style. I connected easily with the main character and really enjoyed the introduction to the main love interest, Finn. There were a few grammatical errors but they could easily be overlooked as the story is easy to get lost in. Great Work!

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Intriguing Story!

An enjoyable read! Really loved the pacing to this novel, the author did an amazing job with this book! The characters are easy to follow and understand all the while holding interest. The introduction to this world was planned out wonderfully, leaving us with an understanding of the plot. Definitely will stick around for updates.

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Amazing!

This authors writing style is very unique and intriguing. We’re introduced to a magical world in a quite proficient manner thanks to her ability to explain the rules of magic. The amount of tension present in her work really leaves the reader intrigued and reading page by page on the edge of their seat. There are a few grammatical errors present within the work, but they can easily be overlooked by the rich plot and the authors writing style. Overall, a lovely read to pick up.

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