𝘈𝘯𝘶𝘴𝘩𝘬𝘢 𝘚𝘢𝘮𝘢𝘥𝘥𝘦𝘳

Oh.My.God

I just finished reading chapter 2 and my hands are already itching with excitement. The book is really deep and mysterious to the point that you won't be able to sit still without thinking about it constantly. There is not much flaws to point about the writer's style except that it would be better if she provided clarification on the translation parts. Other than that this book is a totally worth reading!
Can't wait for the writer to update soon!

Intriguing but needs a bit improving

I really liked how you presented your characters and their appearances. The setting of the story is interesting. Also the plot seemed promising and has potential. But it needs a lot of polishing since it's your first time. There are some major editing that needs to be done like separating the point of views, flash back and narration. Try to stick with one point of view or use third person narration throughout the story. This doesn't make the readers lose focus. Also try reading a few popular authors book. That will provide you insight on the paragraph spacing and everything. And please try using a good book cover. Many of the times, book covers draw readers and you can create an amazing book cover using Canva app.
Trust me, in the beginning lots of writers face this problem, even I did! Big time! I also followed the same guidelines that I gave you. It really helped me a lot.
I'm encouraging you to fix your problems because I know you have lots of potential and you can do it. There might be times when you will feel down or you might feel like giving up, but don't stop ever.
Best of luck!

Needs a bit of improvement

I like the author's writing style because her grammar and punctuation are really good. However, what frustrated me the most was the fact that her narration in certain scenarios is quite short.
Always remember to 'show' your readers rather than just 'telling' them.
Another small point that bothered me was the fast pace. The story feels really fast-paced in some parts. You might want to think about just editing it a bit.
Lastly, I wish the character would be a bit more developed because it surprised me how easily the female protagonist gave in to the male protagonist who actually killed her parents. Mate bond or not, I expected her to process her emotions for a bit longer.
But then again, I've read up to chapter 10 so far. I'm pretty sure the characters would develop by then.
Until that happens, I wish the writer the best of luck because I know that she's really talented!

Intriguing

This story is literally so flawlessly written. Starting from the plot to the characters, it's just amazing! I really like how the writer describes all the small details which make the readers feel as if they are witnessing the entire act themselves. The character backgrounds are also unique and the entire buildup was seriously good in more ways than one.
This book truly managed to evoke a lot of emotions out of me. Hats off to the author for creating such an amazing piece of work!

Blown Away

This story is just so well written that I'm literally losing my head right now. The author knows how to reel her readers in with her captivating words. This book has kept me on the edge of my seat since I started reading it. Truth be told, I hate horror genre because...Oh well, I hate ghosts big time.
After reading this, I think I looked over my shoulder at least a hundred times, in fear.
Hats off to the writer for creating such an amazing piece of work!
Keep going! I can't wait to read the rest!

Interesting but needs a bit help

I have to say that the book was truly a good read. If you are looking for a romance where two individuals help each other out. This book is the right one for you.
However, since the writer mentioned that english is not her first language, there are some pretty little silly grammatical mistakes that needs major editing. Also what disturbed me the most was the references. I constantly found myself confused whenever the writer mentioned 'hell...' and for a moment I thought I was reading a fantasy romance. Sure the effect was used for exaggeration but still. Then there's the part about Dark calling Ray 'Little one' in a medieval fashion and also the whole wood cutting thing and then switching back to normal citylife. It's really confusing. I'll suggest the writer to take these points into consideration apart from all that, I truly liked the story a lot.
It has lots of promise and the plot-line is quite unique. I'm sure that with a bit of editorial help, the writer can improve the book in the long run.

Totally worth reading

This story has so much potential that I can't even start with praises. I love how the author describes the smallest of things in such a unique way which provides the readers with vivid imagination. I can't wait to read the full story and I can truly promise that this book is going to be a major hit!