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I've just read the prologue, and it got me pretty caught. Yet, the different characters can be slightly confusing, and it took me a while to understand what gender the 'I' was. I loved the way you introduced the characters, and I will definitely read more, but maybe try to be more 'direct' or 'concrete' to make it less confusing for the reader.

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