AriTenor

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So far? Great!

Right off the bat, it got HOOKED. I haven’t read a ton, but it’s honestly really good. I really enjoyed the interesting writing style and I felt that the subtle indication that sky was some sort of non-binary character was really cool; it normalized it.
The only thing I would nark on would be some of the phrasing sounds a little awkward?
Other than that, I will definitely be reading more!
I love it!

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This was an amazing story. It was almost like poetry with the formatting; which was genius. This definitely gave me the feels.
I enjoyed the switch of pronouns and from the very beginning it hooked me with the first few lines.

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