Ashheart15

I am a Fanfiction writer and aspiring Author from Australia

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Wow!

This story resonates with you, it strikes a chord in your heart and i think it is very well done. Bravo to you dear Author.

I loved the different stories, the happy ones and the sad ones, and especially the last one I was glad the girl got a second chance. I also liked that you represented LGBT+ in your story.

Your writing style is very fluid and flows well. I hope that you win the competition.

Good Luck!

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