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The Old Man and Charity

Beautiful story! Wonderfully written. I really felt like I was walking with the old man down that road. Poor sweetheart 💔

Broken Evil

A fresh, new perspective on the kidnapping trope. Exciting read!

Blood of a Witch

An incredible story! Fun characters! Spicy times. I just wish the ending had been a little less rushed. But definitely worth the read regardless!

Gut-punching...and gut-wrenching

Oh. My. God...

I really don't read horror enough. Certain not enough to prepare me for this goldmine/roller-coaster of a creepypasta. Anybody who likes creepypasta or horror, go for this! You'll love it! I promise. It's a journey, but worth it. Don't worry!

So don't wait! Take a dive into the longest nine chapters you'll ever read. What? No, they're not long because there's a lot of words. They're long because what the words say. See how you well you swim through them...

That's all I have to say. This story was grippingly horrible and you'll never read another like it.

(...okay...I'm going to hide in a corner and cry now...bye...)

An Intriguing Find (with a swift end)

Enjoyable and intriguing, this story keeps you guessing as to what's going to happen next and why. Following the misfortune of a lone biker named Derek and a freakish accident turned nightmare, you'll definitely wonder whether Derek is the victim of circumstance or if fate has conspired against him.

All in all, I'd say the story was certainly worth the 20 minutes to read it. At times, the dialogue and narration could have been a little more polished, but that's up to individual opinion, really. I didn't find anything at fault with the overall arc of the story EXCEPT the second chapter, to me, took a while to build up to its climax. Once the climax was achieved, the resolution is wrapped in the span of a short dialogue. Then it's roll credits. WHAT?! You had so much going for you! So yes, my complaint is that the ending is way too abrupt and brief for such an interesting build-up that really hooked me in.

BUT! Don't take my word for it. Read the story yourself and see if you agree. ;)

Compelling Read!

A very unique take on a story, if I may be inspired from Alex's words ;). Really, though, it's not often that a writer engages a character to critic the same writer's previous work. This is not even crossing into the amazing setting and tone of the story. Its simplicity was its terror, binding the reader in a maze of suspense and anticipation. Definitely a shout-out to the author! Keep up the good work!

Magically Beautiful in Every Way!

The story was incredible!! I loved it so much! The author added twists and turns that embellished and flushed out the original tale of Beauty and the Beast. I moved between crying and my heart pounding in my chest.

May I add that I am a reader with a short attention span. The style was easy for my fried brain to keep up with and the chapters were the perfect length. Really, the whole story was just a pleasure to read! I hope the author continues to receive love for her story, because it is a true gem!

Thank you for writing this!

Candyland

At present, only one chapter in, but there is a LOT of wonderful backstory and insight into the MC's character and personality. These details help the readers feel as though they are watching a "normal" person get thrown into terrifying, horrific circumstances. The writing style is descriptive and engaging and the characters sparkle with life! Truly can't to know what happens next!