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Worth a read

The first book, as I've mentioned before is still one of my very favourites, and this too is an addition to the list. The beginning had a great flow bringing out her new turn in life. Each character is given deep descriptive depth and makes the reader feel involved with the characters. Just as I've mentioned in the first book, this one too has a very beautiful way of getting the readers hooked. The portrait of the story itself is just enough to keep you intrigued.
The ending definitely got me emotional as little Eve sacrifices herself for Jean. Which strongly proves that friendship is truly a great bond! I might say, this book can be a spark of inspiration for those facing barriers in life, be it among friends or family.
I would gladly recommend these amazing books(part 1 ans 2) for young adults seeking for a different perspective concept. I'm sure once you start reading it you'd find yourself flipping through the chapters wanting for more. I'd really like to appreciate your writing skills GMB1961, hoping to find more intriguing books from you.
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Can't recommend this enough!! Leaves you wanting more!

This book is an absolute gem, I'm so happy to have found such a great story. The whole book is written exceptionally well, it's got a great flow. In depth description, setting each scene beautifully. I just couldn't put the book down... highly addictive and entertaining. Quite a few chapters and I have to say I'm in love with each progression. You can definitely see you progressing as a writer with each and every chapter. Even though I read this story everyday from start to end your writing style never fails to amaze me, you've really been gifted with such a beautiful ability.
The first chapter is the selling point to any book and I think you've mastered it, absolutely amazing. This book got me in early and held me till its end.
I really liked the different perspective concept of the story, the teaser itself had me hooked and interested in where this story would go. Story wise it has a lot of potential and can certainly turn into a unique novel if written with much passion, which I do believe the author has. Being a proficient author doesn't come naturally and in your case, really proud of you.
The way the fantastry aspects have been written is believable and truly sparked my interest.
Most authors rush through the content and quickly come to the climax but I was really surprised by a turn, I guess this is what separates you from ordinary authors.
I really enjoy reading it over and over a thousand times for it really is brought out in a unique and perfect way.
Honestly, your characters are well built and have real depth which helps with bonding with them along the way. It feels like you go through the difficult time with her, Evanora, and truly get to understand how hard and painful such a torment can really be. You never think about it, but what if? You've told this story so vividly which really inspires the readers.
Anyways, I have to admit I've never really been this invested in an inkitt story until now. You certainly have the imagination to come up with the right kind of stories, so dont worry about that. Keep on writing, and don't let anyone tell you otherwise. You are a special gem, be strong and shine your light brightly. You're worth to be seen. Thank you so much for sharing you beautiful work with us and wish you the best of luck and hope you'll one day get published. I'd but that book in a heartbeat❤❤❤ And once again I thank you for dedicating this beautiful piece of work to me also.
I recommend this book to everyone and believe they will be drawn into and carried along by this authors talented way with words. I wish you all the best for your future endeavours and your singing career, you've got great vocals.

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Different perspective

The way the author has written the story seems really interesting, how it makes the reader feel as if we are a part of the story as a character on role. However, there are a few spelling errors and displacement of words which is really confusing to read, if the author could correct them the story would be just interesting as it is.
Great perspective. Highly appreciate the way the content has been written.

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So Cute!

I honestly find this book so adorable. The character development is great and love it. Also I find the addition of real characters really intriguing. Love to see where this is going, will surely read it till the end. You've got some really great writing skills.
Great book.

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Seems nice

The plot is great, storyline is good as well. Character portrait could be improved a bit more. In my opinion the blurb can be a little bit longer so that it gives the Impression of the story well. However it's a nice story. Maybe a re-read can help the author to spot little bug errors. Overall great idea.

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Loving it!

It maybe too early for a review but you totally deserve it. I love the fact that the story is very different from others, great idea! I'm surely gonna read it till the end.

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Intriguing

Wow! This really got me hooked. I advice you to write a short blurb. Already loving it, cant wait to see what happens next. Storyline, character portrait and conflict development is great. Would recommend this to all curious readers.

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Captivating

I must say I enjoyed the story more than I had expected to. The character and story development was high where each had their own intriguing story to tell. The story was both exciting and exquisite. I love the way the portrait was brought into. It just got the best of curiosity in me. Simply amazing and captivating.

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One of the best

This is honestly one of the best stories I've ever read. I just read the blurb and totally got hooked up. Even when I felt tired of reading I just couldn't stop 'cause this story is that interesting and AMAZING. It seemed to keep me curious to know what's next and what would happen to Sid. In all, the story is amazing but adding a bit criticism, there could be displacement of words and minor spelling errors. If the author could only re-read and correct them the story would simply be perfect.
Well done dude. Looking forward for more work on horror and thriller, my favourite genres.

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Absolute Gem

The whole book is written exceptionally well, it's got a great flow, in depth descriptions, setting each scene beautifully. Reading only the blurb, it got me hooked from start. The way the fantasy aspects have been written is unbelievably amazing and truly sparked my interest. I must say, I'm totally in love with the characters. Especially Blue, so cute, pure minded, carefree and Hunter, a complete badass. The sense of humour is absolutely fantastic. Every chapter gets you bursting out with laughter. Dear author, you are a special gem, be strong and shine your light brightly. Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of work with us and wish you the best of luck and hope you'll one day get published. I'd buy that book in a heartbeat🖤💜. I've also read Jack in the box which is one of the best stories I've read, once again thank you for sharing your work with us.
I recommend all the books of this author to everyone and believe they will be drawn in and hooked like me.

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The Metallic Love

Wish there were more stars lol. I LOVE your writing style and content and the way you've portrayed the main characters. I'm just so curious to find if Damian is a vamp or werewolf or maybe a hellhound or something lol.

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CANT STOP LAUGHING

When I read it I remembered that this was the one you made for your sister lol. it's actually soo funny. Keep going! And I will always read em and comment.

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Captivating

Really love the plot and sense of humour. Especially Ethan's character. Great story!

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A great read!

Well, I am a huge fantasy fan and this story had me drawn in. Loved the story development and character portrait. The best part about this book is the plot, I just love the storyline, the way you bring out the conflicts and the plot twists and turns. It kept me intrigued in every way. The SeaWorld itself had a way in keeping the reader interested.
Would definitely recommend this story to all fantasy fans out there.
Great work!

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Different perspective

I loved it how it's not the typical rapunzel tale rather a very different one. I'm a huge fan of fantasy especially fairy tales and this turn over in idea was great. I highly appreciate the author's effort and creativity in it. Character development and surrounding conflict was also simply in a flow. Great story, fantasy fans must check this story out. Keeps the reader interested throughout the story.
Well done with all the creativity.

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A good read

I'm not a huge fan of sci fi but this story brought out more than what it has to. Loved the character portrait and story development. The sense of humour was brought out in a non-serious tone, which I liked it. overall plot and idea of the story was great. Definitely recommend this story to all adventure scifi fans out there.

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Great novel

Wow! When I read the blurb I thought the story is going to be more of a dialogue one, but as I read it I realized there's more to it than just dialogues and scenes. Really loved it how you displayed the character portrayal and surrounding chaos. Being a bit more considerate on grammar would help bring out the scenes well. I love the idea and addition of sheer drama and dialogues to a novel as such.
Hoping for more stories from you.

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A great book

Descriptions, of person and things, and surrounding conflicts are brought out very well, well done with that. However, there are some grammatical errors and sentence structure errors to be considered. For this I recommend you to read fact books and maybe newsletters and formal writings, this would improve your style of writing and grammar too. I advice you to take some time and read your story aloud, this way little bug errors will would easily be identified. Once you do, make it a point to edit your story and correct 'em. For a great book as yours must get more reads. As you continue to write, errors as such would automatically improve.
Overall idea and plot of story is really amazing.
Keep writing, you have great ideas.

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Amazing plot

Just love the character development and description. Despite the few grammatical errors the story is itself amazing. The plot stands out so well. The idea of tribes and animals is great for nowadays such ideas are far forgotten. An exchange of tenses; from present to past and back to present again, got me confused a bit. However, the overall idea of the story is simply catchy. Keep writing, hoping for more better chapters

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Interesting story

I loved your character portrayal, can't wait to see more of your work as you continue to write. Addition of mini creatures to a mythological world was a great thing to do. It's a really cute short story to read.
Hoping for more chapters.

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Great Read!

This book is a must read to all. I strongly recommend this book for romance lovers. Just read the beginning chapter and totally got hooked up. Love the plot, character description and overall idea of the story.
Keep writing
Looking forward for a book two

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Simply Stroking

I love the combination of vampires with angels and alphas. The story is really amazing. Just hoping for more interesting chapters and maybe a new story or a sequel?
Keep writing🙃

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Something never expected

This is a must read for everyone. I must say that this book was something out of imagination...I loved the plot twist and the entire story. Perfect start and a brilliant ending. Never read about a dark cinderella but this is amazing. Loved the way you combined snow white and cinderella in one story and of course it goes along perfectly. Hoping for a sequel in inkitt.
Keep writing dude!!! I'm sure everyone will love it

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