Bambie21

London

Insta: Bambie21_Inkitt Discord: Bambie21#2919 I love to write and read! I have a passion for singing and recently Graduated with a Law Degree. My favourite genres: Fantasy & Romance (Cliche, I know)

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Very Interesting read

Your storyline is very unique, unlike anything I have read, and kept me hooked until the end! The cliffhangers were a huge part as to what kept me reading into the next chapter. Your writing was imaginative, helping to create vivid pictures, especially when the characters used their powers. Each person had a personal backstory providing a realistic atmosphere; there is a great level of imagination.

I found a few grammatical errors, e.g. he was used instead of she, and vice versa, but it was quite easy to understand which term you were referring to. At first, it was difficult to follow the characters at times, as there are so many, mainly because I am not a fan of BTS. The distinctive traits between each character were beautifully and creatively written; each person had their own set of unique traits and flaws.

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Unique story

A very distinctive plot and storyline. Your writing style is so unique and immediately captured me, I could vividly imagine the places you were talking about, it was so well written! The ending was unexpected, I never saw it coming (something that doesn't usually happen to me). I wanted to reach into my phone and slap (youknowwho) silly!!! I really hope you write a sequel! :))

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Exceptional read!

Such an amazing author with a unique and professional writing style. I liked that a few hints were dropped from their pasts within the chapters, giving just enough for us to want to know more! The pacing is perfect, the chapter length was spot on, and I didn’t feel crammed with information all at once; It was spread perfectly throughout the chapters. The plot is clear, and definitely, one of a kind, and the words and descriptions used create a clear image of the character's emotions.
The only thing I would add is that I felt a little overwhelmed by the level of description at some points throughout, so I had to re-read it a few times.
Besides that, the story is absolutely amazing, and I highly recommend it!

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Exceptional Read

At first, I felt a little lost, but that's probably because I haven't read The Shadow Rogue; even still, as I continued reading, the plot gradually made more sense. Your character development skills are exceptional, and I definitely didn't see that twist coming (no spoilers!). Moreover, the pacing of the story is perfect. I love supernatural stories, and you incorporated every kind of supernatural being there is in such a phenomenal and imaginative way. I felt there was a lot of information to digest, particularly in chapter 3, so I found myself re-reading it a few times.
Nonetheless, the overall plot is unique and intriguing, and I hope you release more chapters soon! I'm definitely going to read The Shadow Rogue to better understand the backstory. You should be proud of your work; it's an excellent read!

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Hooked me from the start

I thought this story would be cliche at first, but the more I read the more I realised how wrong I was! The relationship between the three is realistic, the build up is gripping and always left me reading into the next chapter. Your such an amazing writer, thank you for sharing your story! I can’t wait wait to finish it :)

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🔥🔥🔥

Your story hooked me from the beginning! It has a simple plot but it’s so we’ll written, especially considering the main focus being on only two characters, I couldn’t stop reading! There were some points where I spotted grammatical errors but aside from that, we’ll done! I’m excited to read the next chapter ;)

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