Black Elephant

The Six Guardians

I really enjoyed this book as I felt that I haven't read something like it in some time. The world is build very well, and there are many different characters with many different personalities that make them fun to read about. A small draw back to this is if you have trouble keeping up with lots of different characters, it might be a little difficult to follow along. Secondly, I would like to say in 16 chapters this book accomplishes a lot story wise which is amazing. That being said, there were points in the story were the flow felt like it was being dragged on, but other points in which it flowed very well. Overall, I think this story is very well written and would 100% recommend it.

Lucifer's Gift

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Hello...Sir

Things that I like:
I think that the idea of the story is interesting and the idea to let the readers build their version of the characters/story. However, with that comes a few complications. If the story is not fleshed out it makes it hard to be immersive.

Somethings that need improving:

I think the main thing for me is the story seemed a little choppy. Like things were missing and it was jumping from one place to another. The best way I can describe it the flow of the story was off. There were also some grammar mistakes, but that can be fixed with sites such as Grammarly.

One side note that I would add is to fix your rating. As of now you have your story as 16+ most Eroticas are 18+ because of the subject matter.
That being said, I think that you are doing great!

Wicca Academy

There are not a lot of chapters, but even with a few chapters, the idea behind the plot is very interesting and well written so far.

The only criticism is there is a lot of telling and not showing with the characters' personalities. This change can give the characters more depth. The only minor thing is a few grammar mistakes such as misplaced quotation marks and a few spelling mistakes.

Besides that, I am excited to see where this story will go because there is so much that can happen with this fun and creative plot.

The Rise of Luna

To start, I would like to say that this world is very immersive! The world and character building is very well done and allows you to take a step into the world the author has built. This, was my favorite part of the story.

My second favorite part is how well the characters are written from the dialogue to their actions which all makes them seem like real people.

I think the plot is very well written, but for me moves a little slow at times. I think that some little details could be cut, but besides that it is great and the plot is pretty original.

Besides that, I would recommend this book to all lovers of fantasy and romance.

Where the Devil Says Goodnight

This story pulls you from the very beginning. The writing style allows you to be pulled into the world as you are there yourself which not many writers can do! This was especially amazing for me because it was a genre that I don't read often. As always, I appreciate the contribution of LGBTQ+ characters. I will also say that I think the translations in the story are blended perfectly. Which goes to the culture that is brought to this book. It is simply amazing how much I have learned about the Irish culture from this book.

The character himself SHOWS his emotions with the beautiful writing instead of TELLING which really allows the character to seem real.

All that being said, I really recommend it. I couldn't find any obvious grammar errors. The only small thing is that there is a lot of detail that is not always super necessary, but it up to the author to decide if it should be kept. Besides that, the story flows sooooo well.

I Am Kapser

The plot of the story is very original. This story is not a light read, as the story is very complex. Despite being complex the author makes it very understandable through word choice and tone. There are super small grammar mistakes.

Overall once I started reading, I couldn't put it down. I would HIGHLY recommend this book to anyone who is interested in fantasy. The book really takes you into a whole other world.

Gemlish Girl

The first story had me entranced with the writing style. It continues through the book with a great plot and some good character development. It was an amazing read.