BlazingInfernape145

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Great Story! But...

The plot is interesting because it does conform with the actual series and that you have used many parts of the wizarding world. It also entails what many people have wondered. How is Slytherin viewed after the battle of Hogwarts.

However, you have put in too much explanation, Describing Blake's grimace was unnecessary and viewing his plan, for example, was not needed.

Anyway, it is a good story overall and don't give up!

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