Sean Bailey

Raleigh, North Carolina

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Decent plot but predictable. The lead character seems to miss obvious signs of what's going on which leads her to bad decisions. I suppose that could be realistic, but readers typically want a lead whose intelligence mirrors their own.

The writing style is decent, though I'm typically not a fan of the first person narrative. Technically, there are numerous spelling, grammatical, and punctuation errors.

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