Bumblebee6703

Wattpad- Bumblebee6703 β€œYou don’t start out writing good stuff. You start out writing crap and thinking it’s good stuff, and then gradually you get better at it."―Octavia E. Butler

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Pride and promises

This is totally my type of book. And the female lead, I love her personality.
An easy going book with promising story.
I have completed half of the book and will read till the end.
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Destined

The plot is awesome, specially the flow of story.
The emotions portrayed by the characters felt very genuine.
I really wanna see what happens next.

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WolfHeart

There is a saying which goes like : If there's a book that you want to read, but it hasn't been written yet, then you must write it.

I TOTALLY FELT THIS while reading your book cuz the plot is great and I at least, have never seen this kind of story 🧐( two alphas in one house )
A very small suggestion- u can split some paragraphs. ( Well it's not much of a bother so it's okay if u don't )

Overall, it's a nice book. Keep up ur good work !!

Wishing you luck πŸ€

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Blood moon rising

I enjoyed reading your book and am looking forward to the story.
The book cover is amazing πŸ“’ and your prologue sure will attract a lot of readers.
🍁 Wishing u luck.

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πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯

Your book had me hooked up!
I really like the plot and the way u describe scenarios.
Keep going at the same pace as now.
There's a lot of potential stored in here.

Wishing you luck 🀞

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The King of the ruby crown

The plot is realllyyyyy great.
I like how the story flows. The dangerous aura that surrounds Rose is quite impressive!

Keep up ur great work.
Wishing you luck πŸ€

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Omg !

I really enjoyed your book.
Can't believe these incidents happened in your real life. I was literally laughing my ass off at some points of the chapter.πŸ˜‚
And I wasn't able to nitpick anything so yeah, superbly written and explained along with correct word limit. πŸ™‚
Wishing you luck! 🌸

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Secret desire

I liked the book so far and really want to see how the story flows.
Since u have published only two chapters, I can't say much but yes, u have lots of potential !
Wishing you luck πŸ˜ƒ

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Peanut Butter Kisses

I am in love with this book. πŸ’›
Humour is on another level !
Don't have much to say but I am reading this book for 4th time. πŸ‘€

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Great work!

I just completed one-third of the book in one go and trust me it was worth it ! πŸ˜€
I loved that you used poems after every chapter to convey the feelings of protagonist.
The transition of a innocent boy to a heartless person also felt natural.( I really feel bad for him😢😒)
Though I was a bit confused in the first chapter as I wasn't exactly able to catch the sentences and had to reread them but it was a one time thing.
Other than that ..
I REALLY FEEL BAD FOR KASPER πŸ˜ͺ
I loved your book.
And I'm going to read till the last chapter cuz I can't stop wondering what happened next.

Wishing u luck 🌼

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To all the readers out there - This one is worth your time.

The story keeps getting more and more awesome by every passing chapter πŸ‘€πŸ’₯
I got immersed in it 😌

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