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WEREWOLVES! GREEK MYTHS! YASSSSSSSSSSS!!!!

Honestly though, you had me when you first put in The Hundred Years War, I'm a sucker for all things historical and damn, I love the way you blend the two time periods. I cannot reccomend this enough, and my mind is just a mess waiting for another update!! Your writing is beautiful!!!!

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I really like the way you've set this out! I like the different ships logs and things like that, it's super intriguing! The story and the characters seem super interesting so far, I'm very excited to see where it goes!

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As an unpublished, amateur writer, I relate to Paulo pretty hard. Only three chapter have been published so far, so the plot hasn't advanced much, but I've liked what I've read so far!

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It's very interesting, however there are a few errors in this one. Try giving a new line for each person who speaks, it will break up those big paragraphs and help readers enjoy your story! I hope this feedback helps! Besides this, I really enjoyed it!

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THIS IS SO CREEPY! I loved it! So grammatical errors here and there, but they're very easy to fix. Super excited to see the story unfold

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Well, that was a wild ride. I incredibly messed up, in a good kind of way. The only thing I would suggest is being a bit more descriptive in certain scenes! I really enjoyed it though

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Only one chapter?????????? Ibloved it though, the tone, syntax and description lend perfectly to the world you have created. I would love to see this idea expanded on.

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A really cool premise, I loved the way you delivered it as well. Excellent!!

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I really love the individuality of this story. The writing and characters are beautiful. Havent finished it yet, but loving it so far!

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Omg, I love this retelling! There's only a few chapter up so far, but I'm really enjoying it. I like the flawed MC, and the original spin on the genre. Keep it up!

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I really think you could do so much with this story. The main character is really fun, and I enjoyed reading about her. I would love to read more details in your story! Focus on the sensory details, what your characters see, feel, hear. All the best!

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So theres not a lot to read so far, but I really liked it! You might want to try break up those big paragraphs into smaller bits, so they're easier to read! I really loved the descriptions that you put in, and am looking forward to see where it goes!

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There's not much to go on so far, but I really like how you show the girls struggling to adjust to their new life! There are a few basic spelling mistakes here and there, which are easy to fix. Can't wait to read more!

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This book reminded me of Carrie (in a good way). I loved the way you set out the story. It was so creepy and i loved how developed all the characters are. Excellent writing.

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I??? Need??? Answers???

But seriously, this is excellent. A really fckn interesting concept, and I love the way you have written it. Also, I need answers. So pls. Pls I beg you.

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Kegan ❤ this is a nice, fun read. It has a very grammatical misstates, but besides that, I really loved it

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An absolutely wonderful beginning!!

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I keep guessing as to what might happen next!! I'm really intrigued! There are some grammar errors that need to be fixed, but besides that, it's great!

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Quite good, it did get a bit confusing af points, trying to figure out what was happening at times. I hope you go into more detail later, to make your works building clear. It is a really cool idea though, mixing fantastic and gangs. Can't for you to finish it!

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This low key made me sad. But in a good way. Your wiring is solid, and I lived the description you put in! Keep it up!

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Wild, and I loved every second of it. Plot is super interesting, characters very likeable. Excited to see where it goes

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I think the story you're telling is interesting. I like the fact werewolves and these vampires are already known to humans. The characters are well written. There are a few grammatical mistakes and issues with sentence structure, but those are easily fixable! Loving it so far!

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I really liked the imagery in this short story, the use of colours especially. It was a fun little mystery to read, that I found really engaging and thrilling.

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Goddamn, five stars out of five, for a really incredibly gripping and hypnotically written prologue. I am very excited to see where the author goes with it, and I will be eagerly waiting for updates!

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There were a few grammatical errors here and there, that you might want to go back and fix. Besides that, it's a well written, solid story. Something you might also want to do, is to make what a happening a but clearer, through some extra sensory details and what not. Overall, I liked it, and I'm excited to find out the full of what is happening to the character.

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Oh my gosh, I loved this so much. I have the strongest live for New Orleans, and when ever it was mentioned, I giggled so loud. The writing is beautiful, keep up the wonderful writing!

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Olivia breaks my heart. The position that both her mother out her in, is atrocious. Was very excited to read something else by this author, after reading 'Slinthead' and I can say that this lived up to my expectations!

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Only has two published chapters, but I would recommend this to everyone. The mum makes me so, so angry, but I like that I'm invested emotionally in the characters. The writing is subtle, and let's the characters control the story. A book I'm excited about.

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I really love this. Your writing style fits the story you want to tell beautifully, and descriptive. The only thing I would suggest is for you to break up your really big chapters, to make it a bit easier to read! Keep up the wonderful writing!

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This one had made me feel all the emotions, and it only has two chapters up. The authors writing is excellent, and has conveyed the tone really well. Very excited to see where it goes, pls don't keep me guessing!

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Haven't read all of it yet, but what I have read I am loving so far. I like the complex relationship between the sisters. Can't wait to read more!

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I actually really enjoyed your world building, and the relationships between the characters. The only suggestion I would make is to go back and see if you could break up some of the bigger paragraphs you have, sometimes a reader could get bogged down with so much information, if it is not bite sized. Overall, it was excellent!

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I really love the fact that this played out in both modern time and in the 20s. Also, I love magic! Your characters and they way they interact with each other is lovely :)

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So I really like the idea for this book. What i would love, is just a bit more detail in the scenes! Overall though, really good so far :)

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If theres one thing in this world I love, it's a love triangle. I'm so excited to see how this one plays out, I cant wait for it to be updated!

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Not very far into it yet, but I'm loving it so I had to review it! I'm very excited to see where it goes

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Really interesting story, and well written. Loved it.

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