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had potential

okay story. had potential. the characters weren't very believable. didn't know what the whole point of the story was. ending was abrupt. don't know if there's going to be a sequel. the romance wasn't very good. it was between three people. I didn't connect with the live interests. I didn't even know why foster and Brady were so obsessed with the MC. Brady had already had his chance. as well, we don't get to find out what is so suspicious about the MC's best friend and why he liked her.

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