C. Celeste

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Blue Butterfly

This story wasn't necessarily inside my comfort zone, being a little darker than my preferred lighthearted romance genre, but it's a very well-written story that clearly had a lot of effort put into it. Although I can't admit to having read all of the story, again, it's a little dark, I can only speak highly of what I came across. Everything that was said seems to have been carefully placed there to let the readers know exactly what they need to know and nothing more, there were plenty of twists, and it's definitely one of the best structured stories I've come across on this app. The author took her time to let the plot develop, so the whole thing had a very easy flow, There were some grammar issues, but easily fixable things. For any fan of drama, action, and romance, I recommend this book.

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A Diary of Eternal Memories

The story seems to have good potential, but since only the first three chapters are posted, I can't say much about it. It seems to be moving in a good direction though. There are some grammar issues, so i recommend looking back through the story to fix them.

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Slippered!

The story was very well written; everything going on was always thoroughly described, and it went along at a good pace. The characters all have very bold personalities, setting up for all of the adult humor, and I really don't think anyone can deny being entertained while reading it. The whole thing had a humorous Monty Python vibe to it. The authors use of language shows real skill, and although some of the English terms were lost on me, there was always more than enough context so that I always knew what was going on. Overall it was a fun read.

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Interesting read for lovers of Drama

The story is very dramatic, true to the genre is was placed in. It was very descriptive when it came to describing certain aspects of Asian culture, which I liked because I'm not very familiar with it. There were moments when I thought the story moved along too quickly, but I really thought it had a good plot.

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Great work of Fantasy

The plot of this story seemed well thought out, and very original. One of the things I found most interesting was the relationship between the characters. I enjoyed seeing their personal growth throughout the story. Punctuation was a slight issue at times, but overall I'm sure any mature fan of fantasy or adventure would enjoy it.

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The Lady and The Prince

It took me a while to finish this story, it's really long, but it's definitely a worthwhile read for anyone who likes castles and magic and sword fights.. It caught my attention pretty early on, and I think the author did an impressive job with this. Everything seemed well thought out, there were no plot holes, and there was always plenty of adventure and action to keep the reader interested. The descriptions seemed fitting, not too long or too short, and the authors overall writing style is very admirable and professional. The character growth between the two main protagonists was one of my favorite things to read about. It was fun to see them mature and grow throughout the story. There were some spelling errors, but not enough to take anything away from the story. Mostly there just seemed to be words or letters missing at times; like the author forgot to retype a few things while editing. Overall I'd say the author is very talented and clearly put a lot of work into her story, so if anyone is looking for a cool fantasy, action, or romance, definitely give this a read. :)

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Secrets That Children Keep

I really liked the whole concept of two sisters sharing such a close bond traveling through worlds, looking for each other. It was a nice read. The author clearly has a great imagination, and it's showcased in her depictions of all the different worlds in her story. I also enjoyed the small romance that was thrown in there, being a big fan of romance fiction. With all that said, there were some problems with tenses throughout the story, along with some basic spelling errors, but I'm sure most of them can be fixed with a simple read-through of the story. Apart from that, the words and phrases used are a little confusing in context. At times the Victorian-age heroines go from using formal language, suited for their age and upbringing, to semi-formal, to what might be considered casual in the modern age. Again, these are just technical issues. It was a good story overall. Given the age of the heroines, Iassume it's more directed towards a younger audience, but I'd recommend this book to any fan of fantasy. :)

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Dear Prudence

I wasn't really sure what I was expecting when I first started this story; I'm familiar enough with the rock and roll music of the era, but not so much as to say I'd relate to the fascination with it, so when I first read the title and description, seeing that the whole thing was based around rock and roll, I figured this story would just be something I'd read on my off time, sort of having a neutral attitude towards it, but I was sucked in basically from the start. I found myself reading chapter after chapter after chapter completely fascinated by Prudence Taylors adventures as she followed her dad on tour. I've never been to a (non-school related) concert before and I was born long after the aforementioned music genre was in its prime, so it was fun for me to learn about the whole infatuation with rock music for the first time. I never really understood the die-hard fans before and never saw them as a sort of collected family all bonding through music until now. I liked how the supporting characters all had their own story and how they intertwined with the main characters' as it went along. I also liked how in the story there was some romance in it, but it was subtle enough to not take over the whole thing and take away from any of the other major themes. The whole thing was also well detailed, and the characters were easily relatable. Overall the story went along smoothly and none of it felt hastily done. There were a few grammar and punctuation errors I found, but very few, and they were slight, like forgetting to put the end quotes or putting 'on' instead of 'in'. I would recommend this story for any fan of romance, or young adult fiction in general.

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'The Isaac Story' Review

I'm not usually a fan of Dystopian stories, but this one really captured my interest. The choice of words was great and had a really nice flow to it. It's not finished yet, but I'm sure it's going to be great.

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Hleo

I'm only a few chapters in so far, but this story is already really good. It's just descriptive enough to tell the readers what they need to know, but not so descriptive that it becomes long-winded. I look forward to reading the rest of it, but so far it's great.

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Great Story Line

This story is really cool. Reading it is a thrill; it has a great plot and the author makes sure to include enough information about the world so the reader won't be confused with what's happening or why. There are a few punctuation errors, but the story is still easily understandable. I would definitely recommend for anyone who enjoys adventure/fantasy/scifi genres, so long as their fine with a little blood and gore.

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