Cerys Ashworth

Lovely Wales

My name is Cerys and I love writing! Writing helps me forget all bad things and I hope you try it too someday. You can find me on discord: Cerys_A#8991

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Amazing!!

I like this book so much and some things could be improved but overall, I think this is an amazing book and I hope more people understand how much effort goes into writing novels. More people should read this book and enjoy it!
Well done!

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I couldn't put my phone down!

The plot was amazing, but I found a few punctuation errors but all authors have it so dont worry.

I think you had some continuity but again, we all get it.

And I also love how you have told the story. It's like the characters grow in confidence at the same time, you grow as an author.

Well done I am impressed with your book.

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Exceptional!

I've enjoyed this first chapter. I found some grammar errors, but it easily can be fixed. The way you've created tension is amazing. Personally, I think an editor would help.

I will edit the review as time progresses.
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Oh my!!

I love this book in so many ways it's so hard to explain! I love a strong female lead in books. Through my experiences reading this book it brings people of all ages together. You did an amazing job on this book! Most people don't understand how much effort goes into writing novels and I hope you continue writing to show off how much talent you have.

I'm sorry I've made this gave a long, I just wanted to clear things up!
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Very Interesting!

I enjoy this book so much! Well done for creating such an amazing book and I hope you continue writing novels. Most people don't understand how much effort goes into writing novels. Once again, I love this book and I recommend this book to anyone who wants something different.

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Superb!!

I love this book at I dont think that readers understand how much effort goes into writing novels. I think you did a great job of creating this book and I hope you continue writing. I recommend this book to anyone who wants something different!
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Amazing!

I love this first chapter! What could be improved is the sentence openers. But other than that I love it!
When does the next chapter come out?

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