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Perfect romance

Perfect love story with believable characters and a genuine nice guy as the main man. Loved it!

Love it

Love the story but it doesn’t feel like a Stand-alone book, more like part of the first one, or start of a second.

Grammar and tense need some attention.

I love the characters. On to read the next one!

Great college story

I love college stories and this one is good!

Small grammar and tense mistakes but they are not too distracting.

I can’t wait for the next one!

Such a beautiful story

In one word: AMAZING!

Amazing writing

Amazing writing! Great characters, void of cliches despite the topics, and fresh and surprising dialogue. One of my favourite books ever on here!

Gave up

I started reading this and the first few chapters were excellent. But it went downhill from there and I gave up. Too childish, rude and bizarre.

Gave up

Gave up after he forced himself on her even though she said no. I don’t like those kind of storylines

Really nice story but needs serious editing

Really nice story, but it needs serious editing. Lots of spelling and grammar mistakes and story doesn’t always flow.

Gave up after 3 chapters

Gave up after 3 chapters due to the stilted writing style.

Also feel this is a formulaic predictable story, not very different from so many CEO / assistant stories

Interesting story with strong language

Interesting story but with some cliches like best friends, vindictive exes and shock pregnancy.

Too much foul language for my liking, but apart from that I liked it.

Sweetest love story

Lovely and sweet story of 2 enemies becoming 2 friends becoming each other’s happily ever after.

Great story with wonderful characters

A great love story with lots of wonderful characters

The writing is sometimes rushing through the timeline and feels narrative rather than conversational. It’s describing what’s happening rather than living the moment, so to speak.

Apart from that, it’s great.

Gripping and real

Amazing story from one of the best writers on this app. Gripping and keeping you reading till the very end.

Recommend!

Lovely story, but too short!

Sweet story, but way too short. Would have loved more.

Beautiful story

Beautiful and sweet story which hits the nail on the head when it comes to anxiety and what that does to a person. Loved it!

Sweet story

A lovely and sweet story of 2 halves. The first halve business, exciting. Then turning romantic fairytale. Predictable and feeling very much like “The Prince & Me 2” but still sweet.

The other side of all those stories

Have you ever wondered what that horrible girl thinks? You know, the one who is out to get your man, who gets all the boys drooling over her? Wonder no more!

Absolutely loved this book. Could have been even more “bad”, but it was a great read.

Uk to LA and finding love

Great story but a bit rushed at times. More a sum-up of events then getting deeper into feelings. Could do with some more depth and dialogue.

Also needs work on spelling and grammar.

But really nice story.

One of the best books I have read on here

One of the best books I have read on here. Beautiful storytelling, likeable characters, honest and raw and true and lovely.

I can not recommend this enough!

Lovely story but not liking the 3 men thing

I love the start of this story, but wish she had just stayed with one of them instead of all. Too weird for my liking!

Sweet story

Sweet short story that makes your heart beat faster. Loved it

Nice story but bit rushed

The story starts out promising, but then quickly becomes a summing up of events skipping through large periods of time instead of developing deeper, which is a shame.

The main man is amazing and the main female is sensitive and likeable up till the moment where she just leaves for 13 months and you lose all sympathy for her. Not recovering from that when she comes back.

Biggest issue is rushing through time though.

Cute story with believable characters

Great story, believable characters.

Spelling needs some attention, but apart from that I loved it!

Nice story but needs work

It’s a great story line, but it needs work.

The writing style is a bit young, and there are both spelling and grammar mistakes, and using the wrong character names in places.

It has great potential but there needs to be more depth, emotions and character development.

It currently feels more like a first draft.

Would be great to see it expanded with the above suggestions.

Amazing detailed story

Although I am not into BDSM and skipped through most of those passages as they make me feel uncomfortable, I loved this book. Finally a millionaire who isn’t an egotistical asshole and all the characters were real and believable.

The experiences of abuse, trauma, and survival are deeply affecting and amazingly described.

Disturbing

Disturbing main characters. Trent is a mentally disturbed and dangerous individual who will go to any lengths (stalking, kidnapping, violence and threatening the safety of the woman he supposedly loves, including threatening to rape her, and the safety of her friends) to get what he wants.

Amanda should have filed a police report and restraining order against him from the first instance, yet she sees him as a vulnerable man and marries him? She is just as mental as him.

I honestly don’t understand what is attractive about this level of psychological dominance. I like a strong man who knows what he wants, but this is just far too much for anyone to find acceptable.

No is no. Not encouragement to keep going. This is insulting to any woman who has had to go through these ordeals.

Romantic and cute

Loved this story. Great writer.

Grammar and spelling need attention though