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A Compelling Story Worthing of 4.5 Stars

The story overall was an adventure that is appealing to any age. The way the characters develop adds a more human characteristic to the novel. The writing style itself is amazing because you can learn every character's thoughts and emotions. The awkward love triangle and jerk moments adds to the fact that they are teenagers. The way the ending laid out was interesting because you never suspected ----(I won't spoil) to be in on it till the end. The only thing I would change is the fact that it almost seems obvious Sarah is in on it. Why would she leave during the time of the quest and want no one to know her mother is sick? Seems a little random. I give this story 4.5 stars because of it's character development, scientific facts, and compelling storyline.

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