Nightwalker

Arctic Ocean, just beside a blue whale.

I'd buy you a tub of your favourite ice cream if I like you.

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Amazing

Just read a few chapters of this book, but it was definitely interesting and unique. I have never read any book on Deviants and considering this to be the first time, I was generally intrigued. Katrina comes across as a very strong portrayal of empowerment and courage, and that seems very good until now. The descriptions in every scene are realistic enough to hook the reader for more time, especially the cliffhangers, you're providing with. An extremely nice book would recommend to other readers, as well.

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Amazing

I like how this story is a blend of mystery and horror and also contains romance. Jonah and Alex's relationship is so pure. Even the descriptions of the woman in the jungle are emphasizing. A really great read!

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Amazing

I really liked your attention detail and the plot. The story seems extremely interesting and grabbed my attention. The adventure in this story really shows out and I enjoyed reading it.

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Amazing

This...this what you have fashioned into words, is simply extraordinary. And hear me say that because I have gone through various genres and stories, but this...is just new and mindblowing. Even your grammar, and style is pin-point perfect, and I'm so excited to read the rest of the story!
AMAZING!JUST AMAZING!

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Nice

The story is fresh and new, but the starting is a little boring. I like your plot otherwise because it has an element of surprise in it. I can't wait to read the rest. Your descriptions are elaborate in their own way and don't bore the reader. Overall it was a good read!

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Good

The plot seemed engaging and you have outlined the details very nicely. The descriptions were visualizing and it made the story all the more fun to read. Keep the good work up!

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Sinister

The book's writing style is far from Sinister... :))A really interesting book, and ignoring a few plot inconsistencies, it was really nice to get hooked to such writing. Keep it up.

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Sweet story

A really sweet story as of now. Would like to read the whole book as it has me hooked for now.Excited for the rest of the chapters.
except for some minor grammatical and typing errors, the story seems afresh and new. Enjoying the read as of now!!

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Not What I Expected Too

Amazing story.It was hell of a ride,seeing Nicole go though her emotional rollercoaster but still staying strong, especially with Ryan.The ending is what was not expected and so to say it was better.Hoping to read other wonderful stories from this writer in the future.

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Not In That Way

A very interesting plot and a heart warming story.Cora's journey was full of ups and downs but she still made it.Heads up to the writer for composing such a great story!

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Love

Read the few chapters and was very hooked. Amazing poetry, you've got there. Greatly described the emotions.

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Good

I have read just a few chapters of this book, but it seemed quite promising. Hope you continue with this book. Your writing style is exceptional and it really connects with what Charlie is thinking or going through. Really excited for the rest!

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Amazing

This book has great imagery and detailed description. The plot is interesting. You could write more about the characters in details individually, to highlight their own quirks. The story has great potential. Maybe a little more background into the kids would help. Overall a great read!

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Amazing

This story was like the 'Lord' of all samurai stories! One of the best Japanese stories I read here, This can cut through all other stories, like a katana sword. You killed it. Manji's overall character development, especially with Masami was great. All their struggles, and fights with others, were wonderful. The Ronin's wry sense of humour causes the narration to be a First-Person Smartass. After reading it whole, I realized, this is inspired by SoH (vid game), right?

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Not impressive

This is like the first time I have dropped such low stars. But this is what the story deserved. Honestly your portrayal of whatever love and what not hatred wasn't even relatable. The story went on with a pace of miles/sec. That is not how a story works. Too much dramatics. No proper punctuations. Hell lot of mistakes. At least put in the effort to relay the emotions of the characters. They all felt like rag dolls. You can't just jump from loving someone to hating someone so fast, and if you intend to lead the characters that way,at least explain whatever is happening clearly. One moment Ethan loves Diana,and next moment hates her. How is that possible?! You can't just put series of fuck-ups on Diana's part to show why Ethan hates her. And just when, Ethan does a hell lot of mistakes, this girl River turns a blind eye to it. Does Ethan even have a functioning brain?! And you can't just cover up a murder like anything,yet River's mother is bailed within months or days... And Diana is her step sister,but no major confrontation. You're like dropping major life altering bombs every fucking second in the chapter and you don't make the characters confront them? You just take a 5 year leap. Wow. Stories are written so that people can connect with them. But your characters are not even relatable at all. At all. Please work on your plot evolving and emotion expressing before progressing with writing.

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Not impressive

This is like the first time I have dropped such low stars. But this is what the story deserved. Honestly your portrayal of whatever love and what not hatred wasn't even relatable. The story went on with a pace of miles/sec. That is not how a story works. Too much dramatics. No proper punctuations. Hell lot of mistakes. At least put in the effort to relay the emotions of the characters. They all felt like rag dolls. You can't just jump from loving someone to hating someone so fast, and if you intend to lead the characters that way,at least explain whatever is happening clearly. One moment Ethan loves Diana,and next moment hates her. How is that possible?! You can't just put series of fuck-ups on Diana's part to show why Ethan hates her. And just when, Ethan does a hell lot of mistakes, this girl River turns a blind eye to it. Does Ethan even have a functioning brain?! And you can't just cover up a murder like anything,yet River's mother is bailed within months or days... And Diana is her step sister,but no major confrontation. You're like dropping major life altering bombs every fucking second in the chapter and you don't make the characters confront them? You just take a 5 year leap. Wow. Stories are written so that people can connect with them. But your characters are not even relatable at all. At all. Please work on your plot evolving and emotion expressing before progressing with writing.

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Amazing

This is a very nice, different story of Cupid coming to Earth. I enjoyed this because the characters felt real. The storyline is well written. I liked your easy narrative and natural dialogue. There were so many things about this story that were interesting and wonderful. I'm waiting for the rest.

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Good

The story was extremely humorous and it felt really nice to read something so different. Honestly Violet is such a badass
But there were a lot of grammatical errors which have to be edited.

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Good

The story seems nice so far,but there were several Grammatical errors.The plot is also nice. I'd like to read more.

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Good

This story was extremely good.Very different but nice plot. I liked all the characters and how the story turned into a nice concoction of emotions.

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Age of red

This book was such a good read.Amazing plot and kind characters. I really liked how the plot advanced. There were some grammatical errors though but it did not interrupt the flow.

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Amazing

Hands down, this story is really good! It is so interesting and says a different tale. I am really excited about what is going to happen next. The brotherly feud and the time capsule thing set in different timelines is such a good concept. However, there were several grammatical errors, but apart from that, the story is a good read!

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Good

The first two chapters seemed really interesting and I'm waiting for the incoming updates. There were a few word slips but apart from that what I really liked about the story is Miranda's character owing to whatever you've presented here, in the first two chapters.

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Good

No bias too! But whatever I've read in the first three chapters, really captured my attention! A new concept, behind the story and it feels refreshing to know of a different world. The characters have been properly portrayed to bring out their uniqueness.

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Nice

The chapter was extremely expressive and nice.Your word choices were good and it really kept me interested throughout. Pretty excited to know what comes after. There were some grammatical errors here and there,but apart from that,the chapter was beautifully designed.

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Nice

Your story is really interesting, and the characters have their own unique self, which makes it a bonus. The plot is quite intriguing, with the onset of fantasy elements, and I like the pace of the story which is fairly dependent on the different events happening. Good story overall, and I'd like to read more of it.

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Good

Your idea of the plot is fairly intriguing, and I want to read more, considering how you started with your characters. But there are major grammatical errors, you really need to work on, because they deteriorate the writing performance and execution of your plot. You could put in more depth in the characters so that one can understand their mindset better. There is still room for improvement, so a 4 star overall. :)

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Good

There were some major plotholes in the story, but it seemed promising, so I'd like you to fix them accordingly. The grammar can be improved, and you can put in more characterization in the characters other than the protagonist.

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Good

Your book is great. Nice beginning. But I would ask you to incorporate some more details into the story to make it feel nice. Apart from some grammatical errors, the chapter was nice and I am excited for you to continue!

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Creative

First and foremost, your idea was creative I'd like to say, but what backs that creative idea is your grammar, and you need to really work on that. There are no major punctuation mistakes but contextual grammatical errors. You should enhance your vocabulary a little more to make your story engaging. Now, why I gave you a 4 star, is because I think your story idea was good and while there is still room for improvements, you can do a lot better than this. I am excited for your next few chapters and would appreciate if you use some kind of app or checker for the time being, till you solidify your grounds in the grammar basics.

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Good

Except some grammatical errors,the story was good. I liked your idea of compilation of them into a book,and I hope you'll update it soon. Your story had a nice touch to it, emotional and all. The story was nicely woven to a climax and was short enought o keep the interest.

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Good

There are many grammatical errors and your word choices should be changed a little. Apart from that, this small story was really heart touching. The show of first love and how it can't be forgotten. Good! Please improve your grammar a bit though.

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Beautiful

Are you for sure 16?😂God, your poems touched my heart.And I'm not saying just because of your build up in the structures,but the way your language was so fluid. every emotion you tried to portray was resulted there and then in the lines and I'm happy I read your poems, considering I don't actually read them much.
Please continue your work and keep working hard! You've a great potential.❤

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Amazing

The story is so fresh and new! I really liked your plot and I'm waiting for the rest of the story. I liked how you put Elena's character in a sort of dilemma and how natural Sebastian is at being good. :') Please keep up the good work.❤

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Good

An interesting start.The story really piqued my interest.Will wait for the rest of the chapters to be updated. The promising start has me hooked.❤

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Nice

The idea is so different yet nice.The chapters had an interesting quirk to them and I liked how you came up with a different concept.Waiting for the next chapters!!

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The Rejection

How can you even write such a perfect plot?!😂I loved it!It was amazing to read it and such nice and detailed emphasis into everyone's emotions.❤

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How We Met

The story till now was really good.You used simple,lucid language which made it a good read.The story was properly detailed and the plot was engaging!Keep it up.💕

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Niceeee

This story is so great and amazing...I can't stop reading it...It is so different yet touches home.Everthing is so detailed with an amazing plot.💖

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Love is slow

I like your writing style.Please continue with the story! Your plot is amazing and intriguing. It was a nice read overall.

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Interesting

Literally, your writing is very interesting. Intrigued to read more, and I hope you continue it! It takes horror to some next level shit, and your humour makes it sickly better!!!!

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Good,but had better potential

The story was good, but at times in places I felt, it had a greater potential. The story could have been expanded to have a fairly detailed plot, with the love and other emotions of the characters developing over the story. But overall a good read!

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Lured me into the the story

Amazing!!!So nice.A perfect romance,mystery,action and what not.The story had an interesting plot, really nice concept of a cat demon and everything.A pitched plot,careful details and the love between Katsi and Zev make it a must read

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Not nice

Very sloppily written.The writer didn't give justice to the plot.I wish every detail was taken care of while writing this story.

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Nice work

It was a sweet,nice,short story.Definitely a good read.It had it's own moments of wow and romance,a hint of mystery and everything was amazing.Nice plot.

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Shifting Greer's

This was such a nice read.I am glad I decided to read this.Every line was intriguing and had me hooked.

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In The Night

This is such an amazing story, which had me hooked for hours. It was lovely, and even the plot was nice and simple. I liked how the author kept Amelia's character true to the story and had her take action against the perpetrator. The romance between Cassius and Amelia was nothing short of words. Overall it was a wonderful read.

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Piece of Cake

This book is amazing.Apart from a few grammatical errors,the whole read was fun.I liked how the writer thought it was important to write this story.The story did not have any major evil drama,and for a change it was fun reading something so calm and soothing and also teaching us things we should accept.Nice work.

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Nice work

The story was nice, but the plot could have been way better, considering the use of their powers. To explain all of them. There were a lot of mistakes, and the story was written sloppily.

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Nice story

The book was amazing. The plot was nice and a promising, considering the revealing excerpts in the second series. But since the main characters were Ekon and Bambi, I would have liked their relationship to develop a lot more. There were emotional gaps between both of them, which according to me if referred to, would turn out this story into a complete masterpiece.

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Fated

Apart from the grammatical errors the story was good.It was a fast paced story,like it and enjoyed it.Amazing!!!Keep up the good work!!!!!!!It was emotional and had a good plot.It was an intriguing story, interesting till the very end.

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'Just love'

WOOOOOOOOOWWWWW.Just wow.Very different from a cliche love story yet interesting.I liked how the POVs of every other character added to the development of the plot.How the story started with a bet and sex addicts and ended in such a nice position.

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Lovely Liason

Lovely,it was an amazing story over all.Saw the development of each character very closely.The love could be felt with each Continue your good work and write more stories.

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Best and Honor

This was literally the best plot, I've read so far.Bringing out the depth in each and every portion of the story is hard,and it was literally perfect.Even the ending was good.

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Amazing write up

It is a good book,I really like the plot.

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