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I like this story's setting and the characters and the whole set-up. I read that this story is categorized as Fantasy/Humor. For me, Comedy is one of my favorite genres, but I only found myself getting maybe a laugh or two out of this. But you did a very nice job with the Fantasy part of this story. Also, I found a couple of small typing errors, but other than that, I think this story is pretty decent for what it is.


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