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I dwell in your heart

I'm kinda crazy and also wierd, cuz normal is too boring for me. My hobbies are singing, dancing,sketching, painting, making friends, chatting and reading and writing of course. Wish me on 27th March.

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Has high potential

It seems like a beautiful start leading to an intriguing plot. I love horor stories very much and I think this story would rock! However, only some gramatical mistakes need to be corrected, especially the puntuation marks.

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Amazing start!

I like the way the first chapters enfolded. This book seems unique and intriguing at the same time. I can't wait for this book to take shape. I'm sure it'll unroll into something fabulous when it's complete! Keep writing!😊 And best of luck with your other books too. I'm sure they're going to be just as wonderful as this one!

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Very fascinating!!!!

I love the intriguing start!!! The plot is very unique and fabulous! I've already grown very fond of the characters! I can't wait for the rest of the story to unroll. It has actually kept me glued to the screen till the end. I hope you update soon.

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Nice start!

The beginning is very good! However, I think it is too soon to predict what turn the story will take and the future of the characters. Judging by the start, I think this story might take a wonderful shape and turn into something very extraordinary. Keep writing! I'll be eagerly waiting for the next chapter.

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Very unique and fascinating!!!!!!

This book is simply fabulous!!!!!! The plot is very unique and intriguing, and it has kept me glued to the screen till the end. It has caught my attention the very first day, but I didn't know when I started reading that I would get so much addicted to it! I love this book just the way it is, so I wouldn't suggest for any improvement. Actually I was so engrossed in the story, even if there was something to improve, I wouldn't be able to put my finger on it. Gosh, I think this is the best ranking I've given to any other book till date.

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Teach me love

I liked how the teacher -student love is beautifully expressed in this story. I love the cliche theme, can't wait for this beautiful story to be completed

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Simply awesome!

I completely loved this book , and I would recommend it to everyone. I got addicted to this book, from the moment I first started reading it. The plot twist at the end was sad yet amazing at the same time.

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Loved it till the last

It's a very unique and facinating story(not the usual vampire / human love story ), which gets embedded in the heart right from the moment you start reading it. It is amazing how flawlessly the imaginary world, where vampires rule the earth, has been depicted. I really enjoyed the roller coaster ride of Ashira's life even though my heart was shattered into a thousand pieces at her misfortune in the end.

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