DannyMarshall

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Great story

I really enjoyed this story. It spent time building atmosphere, but gripped me immediately. The dread crept up as the tension ratcheted.
I was intrigued to uncover the plot bit by bit, but also hugely impressed that other things were left unsaid - in a way that kept me thinking long after the story had ended.
Truly chilling, fantastic atmosphere, I'll be reading more from Pete.

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