DarkLadyAthara

I write. Finishing what I write is a problem. Unless it's fanfiction. That I seem to be able to finish... I'm also on FanFic.net, AO3 and Wattpad.

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A Whimsical Return to Underland

This was a lovely little story to read. I think you did a good job at capturing the whimsical nature of Wonderland and did an equally good job at portraying the Hatter in all his erratic, intriguing madness. I did find your portrayal of Hamish and Mrs. Kingsleigh perhaps a touch out of character as compared to the film's portrayal, and I would have liked to see a little more in the way of relationship development between Alice and her mother as Mrs. Kingsleigh comes to understand her daughter's feelings for the Hatter. I was also a little concerned at first when, upon returning to the Land Above, Alice seemed to lose a touch of her muchness, but after considering it a little, that really doesn't bother me too much; as the doctor said, she was grieving. But it was still very easy to read and get into, All in all, a very respectable homage and creative continuation on this Alice in Wonderland incarnation.

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