Devotchka22

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Great work!

I really enjoyed the first chapter, it really sucked me in but reading more I noticed that there was no mention of the environment or the chaos that was apparent in the first chapter. I thought that there was a war or maybe an Apocalypse about to go down but it didn't go into much detail after that. The plot seemed to shift quite a bit and I do love the romance and witch aspect it seems there's a few details lacking. That being said I really did enjoy reading your teaser and I'd love to see where it's going. Thank you for the read! And know that I'm not trying to be rude, just trying to dole out a few tips that might help in the future. Good luck fellow writer!

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Fantastic!

I was hooked honestly, the thought of being in Klara's shoes is exciting and terrifying. I enjoy the fact that you used this era to bring about a wonderful story. You sprinkle in bits of cultural dialogue here and there and it's not overbearing. I'm really looking forward to seeing where you go with this, thank you for the great read! Good luck(^:

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Definitely worth it

I really enjoyed how into the story you got, it's obvious you have a lot of prior experience reading science fiction and it translates well into your writing. While it may seem a little redundant at first with the technicalities and development, it definitely catches up and takes you for a ride. Thank you for the read, I hope this helps (:

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