Devotchka25

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Cool!

This is an interesting plot and I'd like to see where you take it. I like that you play with the concept of fate and the protagonist essentially takes on the role of an arbiter. I like it! Especially the light you're casting out on such dark subject matter (a.e suicide). Keep up the good work!

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Great

I can see that you feel very deeply through your writing and it's a saving grace in your life. This is totally understandable because I felt the same way growing up. I think it's beautiful; no matter the situation you can always reflect and better understand yourself through your 'ink'. Keep up the good work Boo! 💕

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Great start!

Can't wait to see where you're going with this! I feel for Ava, her grief hits home in a lot of ways and the it's decently detailed. I'd suggest revising once more, there's a few spelling mistakes, also try not to repeat the same words in a sentence too many times, it makes it seem like it's lacking in fluidity. Anyway great job, I'm looking forward to your progress! Thank you for your time!💕

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Great job!

I really enjoyed the concept of the this short story! It takes you for a ride from the beginning, questioning just who and what is plauging this town with such anxieties. It seems as though everyone's got an ulterior motive in some aspect so it leaves you guessing and guessing. You clearly did some research (or have read a decent portion of mid evil books in your time). Loved it! Thanks for the read.

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Very cute!

How cute! You've definitely got a flow with your words and I like the concept of 'episodes' living vicariously through a cute couple who actually love whole heartedly. Very wholesome! Thanks for the read. 💕

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Great!

Hi! Looks like we've got a story in the works!(^: I do enjoy your writing style, the protagonist speaks to my younger side. Refusing to accept the monotony in life because she's waiting for someone to sweep her off of her feet. I like that your book touches on the struggle that most young girls face. Try not to use the same word too many times in one sentence and feel free to loosen up in your writing! (No need to apologize or worry about the length of your chapters.) Remember this is your creation, no need to hold back! You've definitely got a flow going! Keep up the good work! If you're 18+ feel free to review my book, thanks. 💕

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Fantastic!

I was hooked honestly, the thought of being in Klara's shoes is exciting and terrifying. I enjoy the fact that you used this era to bring about a wonderful story. You sprinkle in bits of cultural dialogue here and there and it's not overbearing. I'm really looking forward to seeing where you go with this, thank you for the great read! Good luck(^:

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Definitely worth it

I really enjoyed how into the story you got, it's obvious you have a lot of prior experience reading science fiction and it translates well into your writing. While it may seem a little redundant at first with the technicalities and development, it definitely catches up and takes you for a ride. Thank you for the read, I hope this helps (:

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