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I realize that this is the basis for the 50 shades book...while the character names were tribute to the Twilight series the story is different...Nothing so far anything like twilight so I don't know what the criticism is. So it started out as fan fiction...who cares....I read all the 50 shades books and really enjoyed the trilogy. I will continue to read this version. continuing after several days It so not Twighlight......only the names have been used....this is a stand alone book....Twightlight was very tween oriented, chaste almost....this is far more adult...and far more erotic....I will keep reading even though I have already read the fifty shades books several times..

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