Dilya Virqirelle

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Absolutely Amazing!

While reading this book (though it isn't much yet) I can already tell that you've put in A LOT of work and it has paid off!

It's perfectly descriptive not to much but not to little and on top of that it feels as if I had jumped through the screen and into the book. I was VERY impressed with what I read and can't wait to read more!

VERY GOOD JOB AUTHOR!!!!

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Just Wow

This book wasn't only just easy to follow but it was interesting!

I don't really have any suggestions for you....JUST KEEP DOING WHAT YOU"RE DOING!

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Just One Thing But It's Amazing None The Less

First off...this is an AMAZING story so far and am SUPER excited to be reading more of it!

I descriptions it was just...wow!

The only thing I would suggest is that you space out the dialogue per paragraph like:

I sauntered down the hall while rubbing the bridge of my nose before hearing the floor creak behind me.

"What do you want?" I snapped turning my head seeing...blah blah blah...that way if you do this it will be easier to read and flow way better!

But like I said before this is an amazing story!

9/10 I will still be recommending this!

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It's SOO NICE!

From the bit that I've read...it was amazing!

It was VERY easy to follow, the paragraphs weren't too long nor were they to short.

I love reading easy to follow stories, due to the fact that I don't want to spend all day on a chapter and try to figure out what it means, this story flows smoothly!

10/10 would recommend it!

I can't wait to read more of your works!

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Mindblowing!

I really like books that aren't super fast paced and this is perfect!

It doesn't seem to go to fast or to slow I think it's perfect

I'm excited to read more!

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Just A Bit Of Work Other Besides That It's Amazing!

Now I noticed just a few errors here and there though it's small ones; the thing that really caught my eye, though, was the description. You need to describe what they're doing, or perhaps even what they're wearing to add a bit more spice to things. I gave you some examples in your comments, and I feel like if you implement those this story would be AMAZING!

On a scale from 1-10 I give this book a 7 due to the descriptions inside of it, but all in all, uwu is a pretty fun read!

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Definitely Recommend

I really enjoyed this! I love how descriptive this is, and the plot is nice!

The only thing that I see wrong is a few grammar errors and with your dialogue make sure you space it out so that it's easier to read...and it flows better.

Other besides that this is perfect!

9/10 I would still recommend

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Excited!

I read only the first paragraph and I was immediately hooked!

This is the type of author that can easily capture one's attention and keep them coming back for more...

For the chapter that I had read (I plan on reading more) I must say that...the way she describes this woman and all of her troubles it feels as if you're in the story yourself!

I'm excited to see where this story goes!

Keep up the amazing work

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