Dina Husseini

Nicosia

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Awesome!!

I enjoyed this story. It did not feel like a horror to me rather than a thriller/ fantasy mostly but it was great. I did not expect it to end like that. Although that is also a nice ending. It is a really great story if you are interested in reading a fantasy that makes you stay at the edge of your seat.

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I Enjoyed It!

It was a fun read. I do not really like scifi but I loved reading The Never Ending Tails. I believe there should be a sequel to this story of even it should be transformed into a movie. It would be great on the big screen.

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Fun!

It was a great hook. I do not like reading scifi because they end up being like all the rest but this one kept me wanting more.

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Amazing!!

What a story. It may be short and small but it is mighty and massive in creativity. However, I did not feel any romance in the story rather than a lot of horror. It was a great read and I cannot wait to see what this author has next on the agenda. Sometimes short stories have the best content and I bet you if you read this one you would enjoy it as much as I did. Job well done. I am hooked!! More please!

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Wow!

I guess there will not be any sleep tonight. There has to be a reason this story is out. The reason is that it is so good that it needs a part two and maybe even a part three. I enjoyed it so much that I swear I will be sleeping with the lights on tonight. I can still see the images in my head till now! WOW, good job!!

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Where is Part II?

I actually enjoyed this romance. It was a lot romance than drama to be honest. There were funny parts here and there for sure but mostly I enjoyed because I felt like I was watching it unfold in my mind the way the writer was stating its romance.

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WOW

This is one hell of a new way of writing a story. I enjoyed reading this story and it is the most creative way of portray a story. Beautiful piece of writing and this deserves a part two and part 3 even. Because I enjoyed it and I am sure many more people will enjoy it like I did. GOOD JOB!!!

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Cute!

I do not know whether to laugh, smile, cry or just be happy. I adore unicorns and this story is so well written that the author made me love unicorns even more is that makes any sense. It is so cute beyond its years. I have never read a kids story before so reading this one made me tear with happiness. It is very cute and I enjoyed it.

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WTF??!!

This story is wonderful. It made me quiver and shake and always turn around and see if there is anything behind me. I have enjoyed reading this story. It is marvelously written and you can feel the fear in the story. This one is unique in itself that it does not need any sequel. A...MA...ZING!!

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FUNNY!

I do not know but I found most of the story funny. Actually to be more specific my favorite chapters would be chapter 19, 28 and 29. Those chapters were very funny. I loved the story. It was fun to read. It was unique and something different. I liked it.

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Unbelievable!!

I loved this story. It was so great that I did not expect it to be this awesome. I swear to you this deserves more than just 5 stars. Beyond amazing. Kept me wanting more and I felt exactly like Emma felt while reading. Although in the beginning I did not expect anything to happen. Then, when something did happen I was like WOW!!! Not that scary though but it was incredible.

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Impressive!

Thank God I read this story during the day. Scary as hell but amazing as hell as well. I still feel goosebumps up and down my spine and am still wondering why did it end the way it did. It needs a part 2 or maybe even a part 3. It was so well written that it kept me asking for more.

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OMG!!!

OMG!! I bloody loved this story and to be honest I want more like maybe a part II... It was so scary that I will be sleeping with a night light because I was so scared. I literally am holding my teddy bear. That is how good this story is. It started out mellow like any normal story would; but in most horrors the story ends up being predictable... As for Primal Fears, you would not expect it to be what it is. I honestly did not picture that happening but I need more. This deserves a sequel. Amazing!!

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Powerful!

You can read many stories that involves pain and heartache and feeling of loss and loneliness but nothing compares to the emotions felt from Trapped Between. I honestly teared a bit and I felt like I was in the characters shoes. Well done.

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Extraordinary!

To start with this is one of the best thrillers I have read in my life. It keeps you on the edge of your seat. Do you want to read something to keep you guessing what happens in the next chapter!! Well, this is the story for you.

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Wow!

I actually liked it although I did not find it fit to be a horror story at all. It was a lot more mystery and fantasy than horror but it was very interesting and a good read.

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Interesting!

I enjoyed this one and it made me wonder. What do you think about writing a sequel to this one. But the sequel could be called The Girlfriend Games. Just a thought. All in all it was entertaining.

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You controlled my mind :)

To begin with,

If you have not read this story yet; well what are you waiting for... Go and read it. The best part of this story is how each character is describing the story in their own words. For example, my favorite parts are chapter 38 and 39 when we start reading what Ava says then it jumps to Cade in the next chapter. This is why this story is so entertaining. You get to have different perspectives of the characters and the story.

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Chapter 8
Betrayal was a bitter sweet in my mouth.

Chapter 38
Stopped dead in my tracks. (Making us want more)

To be honest if you want a thrill and a sense of wanting more, then this is the story for you.

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The Story Killer

This story has everything; sad, happy, fun, scary and mysterious. I am not a fan of sci-fi but I liked this book. It was a nice set up of everything put together. Sometimes you feel bored when reading but 'The Veil', did not make me feel that I was ever bored. You need to pick this book up if you are interested in all in one style book. Impressive!

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WOW

To be honest I never knew you could make a fantasy this scary. I really enjoyed reading your story. At first to be honest, it was a bit boring but then it got so interesting and fun and (also you even scared me at times). I would really love to see this story on the big screen. It does deserve screen time. It is a wonderful story. If anyone is interested in scary and fantasy this is the story for you!

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