EKHO WILDESS

Mina

Second time reading this story❤️ I was a little disappointed there still wasn’t more because it is really good. I hope you finish it. Xx

Suffer in Silence

I am in admiration with this imagination of yours. The way you create a stern atmosphere, one of a grey sad orphanage. It’s bone chilling. I love her way of seeing the world and how you managed to pull me into hers. I would just pay attention to the tense as well as the dialogue formatting. I suggest to use brackets. Well done!

Time Tamer

Roberts writes superbly well! Her imagination is an ode to fantasy, and I cannot stress more how good of a writer and storyteller she is. Little suggestion, perhaps narrow down the number of characters introduced at the beginning. It is a huge family you have there, and the words building around and its magic are already so intricate that it would be a shame to lose a reader in there. (He or she or they would love it, of course, but would he ever come out of it? :p) It is one of the best books I have ever read on Inkitt.

I love playing with Fire!🔥 And this IS Fire!

I’m a supporter! I’ve only read the first chapter so far, nonetheless this story seems promising. The character is…well, full of character, one we love to relate with, sort of a sexy behavior, with hints of coolness and boldness at the same time. Yet, we can feel a slight defensiveness, got the brains when facing danger! Excellent! 1 st voice! Interesting and very rhythmic.
I can’t wait to read more of this newly discovered (for my case) writer! Well done! Am sold❤️‍🔥

MORE!

Writer! Why so short? You cannot leave your followers in the dark. For we have tasted your pen, more ink for blood is needed! I crave for your chapters, hoping you shall make my imagination rise from this chapel’s ground.

Agatha Christie 2.0

This is a diamond in the rough, noteworthy, in progress. For all the aficionados of mystery crime, this one is a sweet one which will keep you on edge. It sticks to the classical genre (Poirot) however, there are supernatural elements. The world is full of unexplained events and the author was right to add these to this short mystery novel. I lost myself in the manor, I could feel the old dust and the dimness escaping thick curtains. Full of classical references, it's a little easter hunt which I enjoyed participating in. For the writer, I would stress on the grammar and punctuation. There is a signature style which I encourage to polish because it's a flowing one. Also, for the dialogue parts, I would avoid the "play" style and stick to the " said Arthur instead of Arthur - "do you see what I mean". I understand english is not the author's first language yet, the words used are sophisticated enough for any adult to enjoy the reading process. Well done!

Uplifting

I've only read two chapters but so far, I felt really good.
I'm generally a hard core fantasy /horror/ sf.
But the flow just carries you onto the next line like sweet water.

So far, a great read. Keep it going.

OMFG! What in the actual Hell!? 😭

You can’t do that, woman! ….And to this, well, I can’t wait for more 😈

Please turn it into a long book!!!!

I’ve had the pleasure to read this story behind the scenes and I’ve kept begging the author to make a sequel, longer or whatever! I want to know what’s next!!!!

Love at First Thrust

I’m at the beginning, and I already love it so much❤️ Queen of Smut! I’ll write a full description once I’m done heating my chair finishing it😏

Jess Blu

A dark dark sinful story I can now hold in my hands. Paper and soul. 🖤

Arax and the Alpha

I can’t wait to read the edited version. 🌖 I just can’t wait💕

I’m so hot and bothered I don’t know what to do 🥵😂

Amazing 🤩

Erotica freakyness!!! Absolutely love it ❤️

This world building got me absolutely in Awe! It’s a mix of Tim Burton with a heavy dose erotica and horror, blended to perfection, leaving you itchy from bizarre lust, addictive enough, you need the updates to get your fix!❤️⭐️❤️

Gripping

I’ve read the first three chapters and it’s an instant match❤️ I’m leaving this here so you can find out why 😈. Great read💛. The bantering between these two is adorkable!

Street Rat Tongue - test

Blacked Out

This book is a gem that, I am sure, will delight all readers once it's polished. Cloe is looking for something like we all do. She also doesn't want to feel pain anymore and seeks happiness. I suggest helping the reader understand who Cloe is and why she behaves in a certain way, explicitly mentioning the real matter at hand. Speaking of hand, you need to take mine as a reader and lead me in this story, describing me your world as if I was blind. (side note, kindly run your work through grammarly or another similar tool, it will work wonders.)

When no one is looking...

The writer is very talented, she writes smoothly, her imagination infusing the text as we read. Sometimes, perhaps I felt she tried too hard, the choice of words, expensive :). She managed to keep me hooked on a genre I'm not necessarily drawn to. I would suggest to select certain words according to context, keep them simple, modern times, right? :) . The dialogues were of quality, I would suggest to add some description in between lengthy exchange, as breathers, thought.
Well done!

The Garden

The author has a swift style, pulling you in the story as you read the lines. The plot is apocalyptic and relatable, real and therefore terribly frightening.
I can't wait to read more, and to discover what will become of Myrah!

Well done!

Gutting!

That girl spooked me out from chapter one! And I’m not going to spoil, but the way the writer has managed to put that grim smile on her face is the creepiest, most well-described psychopathic look I have read in a while. We all know terrible things happen in the most remote places- we all know why? Or do we!? Well done, I’m hooked and will continue my read. ❤️❤️❤️

The kind of prose I live for

This was just excellent! I can’t wait to read more! I love the setting and the MC is just the kind I love. Witty, controlled (is she 🤣) and fun. Yet she puts up with fatality. Way to go!

Great beginning ⚔️

Great beginning! I want to read more. Plot is great. What pain” awaits them?! Mentioned in comments the plot could be honed with more voice given to Anakin. Also, being a sci-fi/ fantasy addict, like real estate 🙈- setting - setting - setting / location location location. I want to be in this training facility smell it, here the echoes of the laser blades electric and alive. I LOVE IT

I encourage you to write more

A beautiful pinch to the heart. a wake up call for the brain and a soulful breath for our humanity

O Angel!

You write divinely! The way you describe your characters invites us to want more. You allow us to feel them. They have personality. Your story is infused with so much personality in fact, we are sucked in. Your chapters are short and well rounded, we can never get bored we can never get enough. I breath your pages. Must read. And who doesn't love chocolate and sweets! They truly are the apple of Sin!

I howl for more!

The writer's swift style and humor disgorge in all the lines of this beautiful story. This is my first Werewolf story, and the first time is always important! This one will be carved in my mind. Fall in love with the characters, both of them rich in personality, mystery and bewitching appeal. It's young, hooking and a true pleasure to read. I can't wait to read the end of the story and can only hope this is part of a series. As much as I want to know the end, I don't want it to stop. Phil hang in there!

The Dream Ride Comes True!

What an AMAZING plot! I will not be ashamed to admit that as a student, I once dreamt okay-many times- of some sexy prince to pick me up at a bus stop on some horrid rainy day, The author has style and great imagination. We've been told this is not her first language and that's ok. noted. plot. superb. Style in the making; it's going to turn out into something captivating, keep on carving your quill, till it becomes nice and sharp! I can only encourage this with a 5! Of course I would be lying to provide a 5 for grammar- yet - it was tempting because it did not catch my eye, I was too absorbed by the story unfolding.
An author in the becoming. Keep it up it's great.

Purring in delight

Your hook is amazing. I loved it.
The story starts with a plot full of hope. Taking place in one the most beautiful places in Italy, the story transports us with smell and taste. Cats are never far and we all know cats are magical ;) they add this little spark with their shenanigans. Romance is everywhere filling the air. It's a nice pace. I would love more description and inner thoughts to really help me situate the characters though. Well done! Mewo.

I JUST TIME TRAVELED!

The author has such knowledge about history, that not only do we dive into the story because of a smooth yet energizing flow, we’re feeling the accuracy of it. I feel I’m learning something. There are many in between lines the author addresses without never mentioning them. Very smart! I also admire the research and efforts put into this riveting story. I recommend for all the adventurers, out there! No! In fact I recommend to absolutely every body/ this book touches a full spectrum. I wish all of you get lost into it! Because it’s a quality bowl of fresh air!

Hexed

A hellish dream so good!
I purr for more…

- A story full of charms -

An enchanting work in progress. Reading the below comments, I can see the writer is taking her writing very seriously, most of the recommendations are being taken into consideration as I write those lines. I am a true fantasy zealot, and this story reminds me of A Wizard of Earthsea by Ursula LeGuin. The writer has a style and its a delight to read. There are minor tweaks but as I said above, they’re being tackled. This is just the beginning and I can’t wait for what is to come. A Magic Gem!

Family is everything!

I was being manipulated through the entire story. Cielo is a double edged sword. I have a feeling the woman, is not to be underestimated. She's got brains behind her innocent face. I was scared of Cielo but perhaps I should keep an eye on Leia.
Gripping!

I'm hungry, feed me more

This story is delicious. I was trying to figure out what it reminded me of. And I remembered. The tone and style made me think of the great classic, Alexandre de St Exupery's "The little prince."But there's more to it. It has character. I feel the author is an adventurer with a taste for good food and style. Perhaps am I wrong here. There is humor, wit, and audacity behind the lines. The author dared a plot where people live in the Sun and the Moon. I felt transported into Mallow's world. And it brought me back to my teenage years. What was I thinking then....of course, I wasn't a princess, but it's rejuvenating.

I want more!

There is something deep creeping in her dreams, and now it may very well creep into mine too! Hellish Farrow!
The author has style! We get to live some EDM magic across the character, and I love this! This story is worth a good publishing. The plot is slow-built and profound, like the dreams of its character, and unfolds in a universe of pain and internal conflict. It speaks to me. I believe it speaks to all of us. The character has spirit. Yet, we feel this fragile humanity in her between every line as the plot unfolds. I can't wait for the following chapters. Well done!

Great start !

Intriguing plot. There is magic and spells, everything for a good dark fantasy story. The FP goes from abused to sudden tsundere, and I wonder what triggers such shift.

Beware of italic, it has a purpose and using it as you do, is not advised. There were many répétitive parts about her mother, one particular dialogue with her brother. It was as if it came out of nowhere. (Breakfast scene)

Despite some editing, this dark fantasy I’m sure, seems promising. I’m modifying this review to help you. A five to encourage, yet it wasn’t fair from me not to point out some things that can easily be fixed.