E.R Lo

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COLOURfull

The plot and the idea of the novel was amazing. The thought of the whole concept keeps readers very excited. The idea is very original. Just keep remembering to revise your chapter as there are some slight grammar issues. Overall, amazing!

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The Lost Heirs

I was intrigued by the prologue, although it could probably use a little bit of work. To me, the huge vocabulary words you used didn't really have the necessary effect (maybe attempt to use more common words?) Overall, great job with this story! I love the unique plot!

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The Perfect Story

The first three chapters are great, other than some minor grammar mistakes, KEEP ON WRITING!!! I am really lookoing forward to seeing how the plot all comes together! Great start! 😆😆😆

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