Elizabeth Nausten

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A good story very well written

As someone who's dealt with literature for most of her life, I am usually very picky with fiction, but I must say that this one is extremely well written. The prose is fluid, even poetic from time to time and, apart from sporadic minor typos, this text is excellent (something rarely found here on Inkitt and that deserves to be called "professional"). The story is not the most original, but it is dealt with taste and liveliness, the occasional smut is enjoyable, and there are a couple of plot twists very well orchestrated. I agree with some of the criticisms I've read in other reviews, however, that the ending is a bit rushed.

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Adventure erotica of great quality

Absolutely loving it!
First of all it is beautifully written: sense of humour, natural dialogues and a compelling pace. The lead characters then are very human and credible, even when they act wrong they have their reasons and you do believe them.
Waiting anxiously for the next chapters!

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