Ellen Reese

I am mostly a Psychological Horror/Thriller writer with a pinch of Dark Humor, but I also write Paranormal, Sci-Fi, Dark Romance, and LGBT+ themed stories.

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First chapter review! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

I liked the main character's attitude. He's so funny ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚
The first chapter was good. It had some backstory and an exciting little conflict. The descrptions from first person POV give us a glimpse of the personality of the MC. He's one angry bisexual guy, and I like how this is going ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

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Interesting first chapter!

The dialogues are casual and so funny. I love it. I seriously laughed while reading some of them XD
This story feels so real. Like I can see Annie as a real person who really lost her memory. Her reference to her nightmares keeps us readers interested to see what she can remember from them.
Good start!

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Chapter 1

The way the writer builds up suspense is giving me the chills! Like, you know something bad is going to happen but you don't know when. The little info dumps between the descriptions tell us the backstory of the character in a meaningful and smooth way. As for the plot, it's interesting enough to keep us reading so far.
Great work, author ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

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