F.H. Blake

Johannesburg

"Cause there ain't no rest for the wicked, until we close our eyes for good."

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Interesting

I must say this is an interesting piece of work. The first chapter immediately got my attention, but the second chapter was a little short. All in all I think it's a pretty good start with a lot of room for character development. I like the setting of the story and can't wait to find out more about the teenagers and what they do. The writing style is excellent and I don't see many grammar or spelling errors. Keep writing.

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Cute, funny and enjoyable

I have completely fallen in love with this story. It feels like something you'd read in The Tales of Beedle and the Bard or a children's book, but it is quite enjoyable for adults as well. There are a few grammar mistakes here and there, but nobody is perfect and I think this is beautifully written.

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Enjoyable

I enjoyed this very much, and can't wait to read more. You've pricked my interest, and I can't wait to see where the story goes. It's wonderfully written and easy to follow, but maybe a few more details in this chapter? Expand it a little and it'll be amazing. Can't wait for more.

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Gripping and exciting

I loved it. I really love your character's voice and I can't wait to read more. It seems like he has an interesting back story and I love the concept. Your writing style is amazing and I was instantly gripped by the story. Keep writing, it is amazing.

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Very interesting idea.It makes me want to read more to understand the plot line, but it is very interesting. A good interesting. I'll be reading this, most definitely. Would like to see the characters established, but it is really good and I can't wait for more.

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