G. S. Pier

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Great story!

You write well. Your descriptions are really good and the overall plot is interesting. There are some things that feels a little sketchy. Like the main character's past. You give hints but doesn't go into details. It feels like there is a part one that I should have read. But all in all, it's a good story. I hope you write more.

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Really, really good!

The story captured me right from the start and it had a nice flow to it. I really like the characters and the plot. My only complain is that there isn't more of it. I hope you write more because I want to read it.

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Well done!

The fact that the story start at chapter 26 is slightly confusing, but other than that it's a good story. I like your style of writing and the way that you managed to grab my attention right from the start. I hope you continue to write and share your stories.

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An interesting start

This feels like it could be the start of a story rather than a story in itself, and I for one am interested in seeing where you take it. I hope you continue writing. Your writing style has a nice flow but your sentences can be a bit too long. It's something I am working on myself. :) But all in all, you did really good and I hope you keep writing.

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Well done!

I just posted my own story titled The Shadow Prophecy so when I did a search and discovered your story with the exact same title, I just had to read it. And yours is great! English is my second language so I am not a very good judge of punctuation and grammar and such, so I am giving you the benefit of doubt. :) As for all the rest, it's a good story. It's set in Harry Potter-verse but it feels a lot more like original fiction than fan fiction. You have a good thing going with it and I hope to read more about Nico in the future.

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