Dark thriller, well worth the read
I've finished the first three chapters of "Ladies Close Your Eyes" and was so engrossed, I had to write a review immediately. As a fan of both thrillers and descriptive imagery, I was completely immersed in the world the author created. The details are so vivid, you can picture the plot perfectly as if you were watching a movie and not simply envisioning it in your mind. My one note of caution would be that, because of the vivid description, the depictions of murder and postmortem injury are so grim that they would be best interspersed by longer, lighter moments, simply to give the reader relief from the darkness (e.g. the break between the first chapter and the end of the second). Other than some simple punctuation problems that could be fixed with editing, this novel is well worth the read, bringing a unique perspective to the genre. I am excited to see what happens next!
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