Grettel27

Wow

Wow! This is a very good story. It reminded me of lucid dreams, when someone knows that is a dream and has the possibility to change the dream.

One interesting fact is that most of the girls I know, including me have had non sexual dreams about this guy without a clear face. It's like you get visited by someone in your dreams .

I really like this story and I'm eager to read more. 😊

Hades

I love the fact that the main character has the name of Hades, since I'm obsessed with greek mythology.
I think Hades is introvert and maybe depressed, I'm eager to learn about the reasons that made him create the kind of character he has.

I'm eager to read more of you.
Keep up the good job! 😊

Magical

I have read a very interesting perspective on supernatural like mermaid, witches and angles. The dialogue was very intensive and it left you in darkness seeking for more. Mysterious conversations, mysterious characters and legends .

I just with the characters would be identified with a name because sometimes it became confusing understanding who was speaking and what intended to say.

Overall it is amazing for those who want to read fantasy and get lost into a magical world.

Thank you for giving me the possibility to read something valuable .

Continue with the good work!

Fantasy

I like the idea of parallel universes and creating another universe according to your fantasy. It is well described.
Since is the first chapter , I'm eager to read the updates.
Keep up the good work!

Intriguing

like the plot, the characters are well described. It just happened all too fast , with their relationship I mean. I would like to see more the cold and dark side of Koa. It is an intriguing plot. I like that Amara is a brave girl , ready to make the first move. Keep up with the good work! I'm eager to read more.

Inspiration

The message that I get from what I read is to follow our dreams finding inspiration even in those things that make us loose hope. It is beautiful to experience having a muse as inspiration when you write. Also reminded me of high school crush , unfortunately not everyone ends up with their high school crush , they part ways after graduation but I really liked the idea of the characters meeting again.

Good start

It is a good start, a good plot. I would prefer more dialogue , when the situations are explained through dialogues. And the chapters to be longer. But that's only my preference, you continue to write how you think is best for you.

I'm eager to read more.

Keep up the good work! 😊

Icarus

I'm very obsessed with greek mythology, and have read about Icarus . I think it is a good idea to bring a story expanding it . I'm giving more stars because I don't want to lower the review rates.

But I think you have to work a little on dialogues , I can't separate who is talking, who is saying what.
It becomes a little difficult to read.

English is not my native language, I have grammatical errors in what I write as well, so I'm not gonna comment on that , I try to revise my chapters.

I think it is a good story overall, continue writing whatever inspires you. 😊

The walls

It is a good plot. What I understood is a heart broken girl who builds walls to protect herself because she is afraid of getting hurt again and again. Because every time she lets her walls down she gets hurt. I would like to see more dialogue than narrating. But I liked it. Keep up the good work!

Magical

I am very fond of fantasy genre. I adore the plot and I'm in love with the idea of creating another reality different from what we know and live.
I think the fae is Alaric's mate If I'm not wrong.
Keep up the good work. I'm eager to read more of you.

Queen Jazzzzz

I like the plot, but it was a bit difficult for me to understand those flashbacks or going back in time (after 20 min , after 1 hour.) In my personal opinion since it's being narrated in the first person, not by a third person (the author) I would like to see more feelings of the main character rather than actions. I mean I would like to read how the main character is feeling, what is thinking rather than "I washed my teeth, I wore this brand dress etc.). But it is personal preference, you continue to write however you think it's best for you.
I'm sure when you find the time you will revise it for grammar mistakes and punctuation.

English is not my native languege and I have to revise what I write when I find time.
But I like the plot , the main character is a brave girl who isn't afraid to say what she thinks or to enjoy life apart her pain for the loss of her mother. I am eager to read more of your work. 😊

Amazing plot

It is an amazing plot. The description in details of the major character as a nerd, I felt like I met him. I love the element of surprize, not knowing what is going to happen next as a reader. It is very interesting and intriguing. I am eager to read more. 😊

The element of surprise

I read all the chapters written till now. I really liked the detailed description, I felt like I had in front of my eyes the scene when he fell sick in Alma's apartment. I love the element of surprise, not knowing what will happen next. I enjoyed reading it, I am eager to read more of your work. 😊

Make me, Alpha

It is a good plot, and I love werewolves stories. Although I had some difficulty while reading it because of the grammar mistakes, but I am sure you will revise them with the time. I am not an English native speaker/writer, from time to time I revise what I have written to correct my grammar mistakes. From what I have read till now it is a very good story, I am eager to read more of your work. 😊