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Fabulous!

The story is amazing!! Every part of it took the breath out of me. Honestly, it sent a tickle down in my spine. Fantastic work. You've written just like we are experiencing the story. Awesome!

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Praise-worthy!

As a beginner, your passion towards the story is amazing. I liked the plot-building and characters especially little Oliver. . Mystery and Thrillers? I'm on! Keep Writing! Here's wishing you luck on your journey of writing! Regards; Stay safe...Waiting for your next chapter!

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Wonderful!

The story is so good! The plot, the characters are so amazing. The narration is just awesome. I'm waiting for more of it! A change is just important for everyone's life just like Violet's. Beautifully written! Keep Writing; Regards! Stay Safe!!!

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Wonderful!

The story is so good! The plot, the characters are so amazing. The narration is just awesome. I'm waiting for more of it! A change is just important for everyone's life just like Violet's. Beautifully written! Keep Writing; Regards! Stay Safe!!!

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Nice!

The poems are magical and sweet. Simple yet capitative. Your views on different perspectives is clearly explained. Likable and awesome! Keep writing;

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Fabulous!

This book is amazing! It reaches out to the hard-hearts and melts them with sympathy. I've got a similar idea of this one..(though different). Yes, the actual fact that there are people who need love is clearly highlighted. Thank yoou for the story, it is a masterpiece. Please Can You write a sequel? It's so awesome and I can't take the fact that It's done already.

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Awesome!

The story was sooooooooo good!!!!!!!! I just can stop admiring your writing especially in this genre. I'm struck my the story. Everything was in detail ready to captivate the reader. Absolutely deserves the five stars. Keep writing; Regards; Waiting sooo eagerly for your next one!!!! Stay safe! Regards;

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SCARY!

The story is just awesome. The twist is especially captivating. I felt my heart skip a beat while reading it. Trust me, your stories bring me down into the world of horror and suspense. It was awesome reading it. Deserves the five stars. Great author! Keep writing; Regards; Stay safe!!!!

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Creepy!

The entire story was great! But I feel that it deserves a better ending. Apart from that, everything is amazing. The presence, the detail everything just fit into the story like a piece. I felt really involved into it. Great work! Keep writing! Regards;

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Excellent!

The story is so great that I have no words to express it. The plot, the characters, the imagery are amazing! The way you bring out the Egyptian culture is fabulous. I am impressed by this story!
Keep Writing; You deserve the five stars...Smiles;

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Lovely!!

I'm tied by the story! I loved it all the way right from the beginning...Highlighting the bond between dogs and kids is really awesome; A Story that gets you into the scene is great and yours is just like that! I love dogs too! "Lie to cover a lie" is perfectly annotated, Keep Writing;Great Job! Keep Writing! Stay Safe! God Bless Ya!

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Awesome!

I can absolutely tell you that this story is the synonym of Perfection..Amazing and Perfect. I had tears in my eyes when you narrated how Samuel passed away. Your story brings out the true feelings of a person suffering with Cancer. The most heart-touching story I ever Read. Please can you write a sequel? I am dying to know what happened to Amarea..I'm literally into the story. ...Please, please, please write a sequel!
Awesome Work! Keep Writing! Stay Safe! Regards

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Amazing!

Bullying really causes a lot of problems especially in high school! You've perfectly brought out the situation. The story is really amazing and I'm waiting for the next one! Great Job@Sissi!!! I've really liked it!

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Impressive!

Honestly speaking I never read stories that have a lot of relationships but your story is an exception. The way you bring out each bit is amazing! I wonder how cute Issac actually looks like! Good Job! Keep Writing!

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