Hlinton

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Intrigued

Overall the story is very interesting and I'm looking forward to reading the rest of it. It could use some editing as the tense seems to vary a bit and took me out of the story in a few places, but I think with a little bit of polishing up it can give some of even the most seasoned writers a run for their money. Would definitely recommend it and I can't wait to see how it turns out after undergoing the editing process!

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Has Promise

The plot is interesting, but the story could use some polishing up. I agree with the other reviews that it could benefit from showing not telling. Overall, I really enjoyed it and look forward to seeing suggestions worked into future chapters!

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Decent plot

The story so far is excellent overall. It could use some editing for grammer and word choice in a few places as repetitive use in some places pulled me out of the story a bit.

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